Beautiful! I envy the way you manage to make them sweet and yet still in character. It IS in character of course but I just feel like it is so hard to capture.
I loved the way you kept touching on the past in this. With just a few words you brought me back to each of those times.
And of course it was hot as well! Lovely job!
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notreallyme10 (notreallyme10) wrote in bj_action on August 27th, 2007 at 08:46 pm