Wow, wow. I love this. OMG. I need to take it to bed with me and cuddle up with it tonight. It has my favorite things ever in it: withholding comming, bottom!Brian, and sneaky Brian. Wow. Man, I could feel Justin's pain. Thanks for this.
Oh damn was that hot. I didn't realize I like desperate!Justin until I read this!!
Thanks! I too love desperate!Justin :)
"Just so you know, in the future when you want to get fucked, all you have to do is ask."
"Where's the fun in that?"
Haha. Such a Brian thing to say. Ahem... that was hot.
"Just so you know, in the future when you want to get fucked, all you have to do is ask."
Silly boy, that is EXACTLY what he was doing!!
LOL! Justin just has to remind him that he is on to him :)
i loved how brian passed control over without justin realizing it.
He's good like that :) Thanks!
God, I love Brian trusting Justin enough to let go and be all bottomy, and that Justin knows exactly how to take care of him. Ummm, this line just so does it for me...
His head flies back again and he lets out a long breathy moan while his cock jerks in my hand.
The visual of that just makes me all melty!
impatient!Justin is very, very hot...just like this fic!!
Those last two lines had me LOLing!! *giggles* Oh Brian, you certainly don't do anything the easy way, do you? :)
He really can't! LOL! Thanks!
very hot. but despite all the hotness, my favorite sentence was this one: "I lay on him until he makes a noise of complaint." Don't know why, but I love that.
Glad you liked it :) Thanks!
Un-fucking-believable great! It's so Brian-like!
♥ ♥ ♥ You melted my brian as always.
I'm still trying to work out how I feel about that thing we talked about. The bleh-ness of it all is making it hard to decide what I want to do. But yes, everything you said? I agree with you. I will email you soon. *hugs*
Thank you darling!
I just sent you another email :)
You are the Queen of Porn for me. Seriously. You have it all: the hotness, the love, the characters spot on. And did I mention the hotness? *thud*
"I swear I'm going to fucking kill you if you don't let me come."
He smirks at my expense.
"You really need to relax." *gg* Evil, Brian.
When I touch his cock it's wet. I'm tempted to torture him the way he tortured me, to fuck him and not let him come. But there is nothing like the feel of Brian coming while I'm inside him. Guhh! No words.
"Just so you know, in the future when you want to get fucked, all you have to do is ask."
"Where's the fun in that?" I don't know about Justin, but it sure was fun to read, heh.
Thank you!!
You are the Queen of Porn for me.
REALLY?! Wow! Thank you so much :) This is the sweetest comment ever... I'm grinning all over the place :D
The ending lines are perfect! Although I'm sure Justin thinks it was worth the wait.
Oh, yum. Playful and hot and a fun read as well! And this:
I grip his hips tighter and use them to pull him into my thrusts. I learned that from him, it makes everything deeper, more intense. He drops his head to the bed and just lets me fuck him.
Um, yeah. Nice visual. Really nice. :D
~Ellen
Hee, those are the exact lines I was going to quote too. Brian putting his head down and taking it? Unnnngh.
Very hot!
It's the kind of orgasm that brings tears to your eyes and makes your forget everything except the heat that's pressing in on you from all sides. It’s the kind of orgasm that leaves every muscle limp and your mind completely blank. Kind of like we are left after reading your fic? *grin*
OMG...this was hot and snarky and sexy and just, yeah. I'm brain dead.
But this part is what seriously did me in: I grip his hips tighter and use them to pull him into my thrusts. I learned that from him, it makes everything deeper, more intense. He drops his head to the bed and just lets me fuck him. Just the image alone may require blood pressure medicine. Can I thank you enough? LOL
Your feedback makes me very happy :D Thank you so much darling!
omg, teasing, slutty!Brian owns me! This was smokin' HOT HOT HOT.
you always deliver and this is no exception so fucking sexy and hot
*wipes drool*
this is one of my happy places. :D
Thank you so much! And thank you for throwing this together... it turned out to be a lot of fun instead of torture like I was expecting!
You're my porn goddess, this was soooo HOT!!! you could feel Justin's desperate need to come, lol.
And the 2 last lines made me laugh, so thank you. ;-)
That is SO NICE!!! Thank you very much :)
Well, fuck. That was hot. And amusing. But really way more hot. ;) |