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happier_bunny ([info]happier_bunny) wrote in [info]bj_action,
@ 2009-04-18 22:20:00

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Current mood: flirty
Entry tags:author: notreallyme10, theme #12: without words

Theme #12: Without Words - Fic 5 of 5
TITLE: Want
AUTHOR: [info]notreallyme10
A/N: Thanks to my lovely beta [info]_alicesprings




"Jesus Christ Brian, enough already!"


I put my hands on either side of his head and try to fuck his face. I can't help it, I have to come. Now.


But his hands still my hips and his lips slide off my dick.


"Patience, Sunshine."


"Fuck you Brian. I was patient for the first hour, now I just need to come."


He leans forward and laps gently at the tip of my cock with his tongue.


I clench my fists in the sheets and fight the urge to scream. It's a bad cliché straight guys use to get their girlfriends to put out but I swear to god it hurts. My cock and balls ache I need to come so badly.


He moves up my body and starts to suck on my neck. I grab my cock and try to stroke it but his hand is right there, stopping me.


"I swear I'm going to fucking kill you if you don't let me come."


He smirks at my expense.


"You really need to relax."


He rolls off me and reaches for the joint on the nightstand. But all I see is the strong muscles of his back, ass and thighs stretched out in front of me. I roll on top of him.


He struggles a little, playfully, but he doesn't push me off. I straddle him and reach for the lube and a condom; I don't have time to play.


I open him with two fingers. His head lifts up off the pillow. He's silent but that one little move tells me everything I need to know. I push a third wet finger inside and thrust hard a few times. I have to get inside him right now.


I pull my fingers out and lean back to put the condom on and he moves to his knees.


I hold him by the hips while I push in fast and hard. He asked for this. Now he moans. The noise is a little harsh from surprise but there's pleasure in it too so I don't slow down.


I grip his hips tighter and use them to pull him into my thrusts. I learned that from him, it makes everything deeper, more intense. He drops his head to the bed and just lets me fuck him.


When I touch his cock it's wet. I'm tempted to torture him the way he tortured me, to fuck him and not let him come. But there is nothing like the feel of Brian coming while I'm inside him.


I move my hand to his balls and squeeze gently. I move back to his cock and rub my thumb over the wet tip a few times before tightening my grip.


And that's all it takes for him to come. His head flies back again and he lets out a long breathy moan while his cock jerks in my hand.


I thrust through it, even harder and faster than before and finally, finally come.


It's the kind of orgasm that brings tears to your eyes and makes your forget everything except the heat that's pressing in on you from all sides. It’s the kind of orgasm that leaves every muscle limp and your mind completely blank.


I lay on him until he makes a noise of complaint. I roll off and clean up a bit.


He grabs the joint, lights it and takes a hit before passing it to me.


"Just so you know, in the future when you want to get fucked, all you have to do is ask."


"Where's the fun in that?"



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[info]maxymama
2009-04-18 10:01 pm UTC (link)
Wow, wow. I love this. OMG. I need to take it to bed with me and cuddle up with it tonight. It has my favorite things ever in it: withholding comming, bottom!Brian, and sneaky Brian. Wow. Man, I could feel Justin's pain. Thanks for this.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Thank you so much!

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[info]noteverything
2009-04-18 10:10 pm UTC (link)
Oh damn was that hot. I didn't realize I like desperate!Justin until I read this!!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I too love desperate!Justin :)

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[info]pour_us_a_road
2009-04-18 10:33 pm UTC (link)
"Just so you know, in the future when you want to get fucked, all you have to do is ask."


"Where's the fun in that?"


Haha. Such a Brian thing to say. Ahem... that was hot.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]1bongo1
2009-04-18 10:46 pm UTC (link)

"Just so you know, in the future when you want to get fucked, all you have to do is ask."

Silly boy, that is EXACTLY what he was doing!!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:10 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Justin just has to remind him that he is on to him :)

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[info]sjmpets
2009-04-18 11:02 pm UTC (link)
i loved how brian passed control over without justin realizing it.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:10 pm UTC (link)
He's good like that :) Thanks!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-04-18 11:20 pm UTC (link)
God, I love Brian trusting Justin enough to let go and be all bottomy, and that Justin knows exactly how to take care of him. Ummm, this line just so does it for me...

His head flies back again and he lets out a long breathy moan while his cock jerks in my hand.

The visual of that just makes me all melty!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:11 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Thank you :)

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[info]frantic_quest
2009-04-18 11:26 pm UTC (link)
impatient!Justin is very, very hot...just like this fic!!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much!

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[info]rosy5000
2009-04-19 12:22 am UTC (link)
Those last two lines had me LOLing!! *giggles* Oh Brian, you certainly don't do anything the easy way, do you? :)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:11 pm UTC (link)
He really can't! LOL! Thanks!

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[info]not_yet_defined
2009-04-19 12:32 am UTC (link)
very hot. but despite all the hotness, my favorite sentence was this one: "I lay on him until he makes a noise of complaint." Don't know why, but I love that.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:15 pm UTC (link)
Glad you liked it :) Thanks!

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[info]michira_70
2009-04-19 03:42 am UTC (link)
Un-fucking-believable great! It's so Brian-like!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:32 pm UTC (link)
Yay!! Thank you!

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[info]claddagh_girl
2009-04-19 04:37 am UTC (link)
♥ ♥ ♥
You melted my brian as always.

I'm still trying to work out how I feel about that thing we talked about. The bleh-ness of it all is making it hard to decide what I want to do. But yes, everything you said? I agree with you. I will email you soon.
*hugs*

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:35 pm UTC (link)
Thank you darling!

I just sent you another email :)

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[info]kari77
2009-04-19 05:46 am UTC (link)
You are the Queen of Porn for me. Seriously. You have it all: the hotness, the love, the characters spot on. And did I mention the hotness? *thud*

"I swear I'm going to fucking kill you if you don't let me come."

He smirks at my expense.

"You really need to relax."

*gg* Evil, Brian.

When I touch his cock it's wet. I'm tempted to torture him the way he tortured me, to fuck him and not let him come. But there is nothing like the feel of Brian coming while I'm inside him.
Guhh! No words.


"Just so you know, in the future when you want to get fucked, all you have to do is ask."

"Where's the fun in that?"

I don't know about Justin, but it sure was fun to read, heh.

Thank you!!


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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:38 pm UTC (link)
You are the Queen of Porn for me.

REALLY?! Wow! Thank you so much :) This is the sweetest comment ever... I'm grinning all over the place :D

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[info]jule1122
2009-04-19 09:34 am UTC (link)
The ending lines are perfect! Although I'm sure Justin thinks it was worth the wait.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:38 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]testdog65
2009-04-19 03:05 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yum. Playful and hot and a fun read as well! And this:

I grip his hips tighter and use them to pull him into my thrusts. I learned that from him, it makes everything deeper, more intense. He drops his head to the bed and just lets me fuck him.

Um, yeah. Nice visual. Really nice. :D

~Ellen

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-19 07:39 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-04-19 10:32 pm UTC (link)
Hee, those are the exact lines I was going to quote too. Brian putting his head down and taking it? Unnnngh.

Very hot!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-21 05:44 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]outlander
2009-04-20 02:49 pm UTC (link)
It's the kind of orgasm that brings tears to your eyes and makes your forget everything except the heat that's pressing in on you from all sides. It’s the kind of orgasm that leaves every muscle limp and your mind completely blank.
Kind of like we are left after reading your fic? *grin*

OMG...this was hot and snarky and sexy and just, yeah.
I'm brain dead.

But this part is what seriously did me in:
I grip his hips tighter and use them to pull him into my thrusts. I learned that from him, it makes everything deeper, more intense. He drops his head to the bed and just lets me fuck him.
Just the image alone may require blood pressure medicine.
Can I thank you enough? LOL


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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-21 05:48 pm UTC (link)
Your feedback makes me very happy :D Thank you so much darling!

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-04-20 08:51 pm UTC (link)
omg, teasing, slutty!Brian owns me! This was smokin' HOT HOT HOT.

you always deliver and this is no exception so fucking sexy and hot

*wipes drool*

this is one of my happy places. :D

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-21 05:49 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! And thank you for throwing this together... it turned out to be a lot of fun instead of torture like I was expecting!

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[info]besamislabios
2009-04-21 11:13 am UTC (link)
You're my porn goddess, this was soooo HOT!!! you could feel Justin's desperate need to come, lol.

And the 2 last lines made me laugh, so thank you. ;-)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-21 05:50 pm UTC (link)
That is SO NICE!!! Thank you very much :)

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[info]the_minx_17
2009-09-18 05:31 pm UTC (link)
Well, fuck. That was hot. And amusing. But really way more hot. ;)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-09-22 02:45 am UTC (link)
Thank you :D

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