18 April 2009 @ 10:17 pm
Theme #12: Without Words - Fic 3 of 5  
TITLE:Set Me Reeling
AUTHOR:[info]noteverything
WARNINGS:It's porn, be warned.
A/N:HUGE hugs and thanks and kisses to [info]besamislabios for her not-beta. She pretty much held my hand the whole time I was writing. I swear every time I do a challenge that I’m never writing porn again. It never gets easier!


Before he met Brian, Justin had certain fantasies he liked to jerk off to. There was the hot soccer-playing exchange student at St. James, or the neighbor’s gorgeous pool boy, and a personal favorite, his 8th grade math teacher while he was serving detention for skipping class.

Now all his fantasies all center on Brian. He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.

Today, it’s one of those mindless sort of fantasies. Justin was spread out on Brian’s bed. He’d kicked off his shoes and removed his tie, but still had on his white shirt and gray slacks, lowered just enough to give himself access to his cock and balls.

As he pulled at his dick, his eyes closed and he lost himself to vague thoughts of Brian: fingering his ass, pushing his tongue in next to his fingers, making him moan with pleasure. Heat began to spread through his body, and Justin reached down to pull at his balls, his back arching off the bed, head tilting back into the pillows.

Only when he lifted his head back up to watch his hand working at his dick did he see Brian, leaning against the door frame, watching him. Justin just smiled lazily at him, never missing a stroke. Even through the haze of his approaching orgasm, Justin could tell what Brian wanted.

At first, Brian didn’t respond to Justin’s smile. Finally, he looked up from watching Justin touch himself to give him a slow, sexy smile back. He watched for another moment, then made his way to the bed, reaching into his back pocket as he walked.

Justin never stopped touching himself, keeping his eyes on Brian as he walked to the bed. He’d pulled a condom out of his pocket and now he held it between his teeth as he undressed and pulled Justin’s pants off as well. Then he knelt between Justin’s legs and ripped the condom package open. He slapped at Justin’s hands until he released the hold on his cock, gasping a little when he did. Brian leaned over Justin and kissed him, slow and sexy, just like he’d smiled at him before, then raised back up and rolled the condom down Justin’s dick.

Justin’s heart hitched in his chest. He stared at Brian steadily for a few moments before he pulled him back down, tongue pushing into Brian’s mouth greedily, his sheathed dick rubbing against Brian’s. As they kissed, Justin pushed at Brian until he rolled over, pulling Justin on top of him. They still hadn’t spoken a word to each other.

When the kiss finally broke, leaving Justin absolutely breathless, he moved off Brian and pushed at him gently until Brian rolled over, spreading his legs slightly. His head turned to the side as he settled into his own folded arms. Justin knelt between his thighs, running his hands up from the backs of his knees to his ass, watching Brian’s face flush slightly as he did. He stroked him aimlessly for a while, relishing the feel of hard muscle and soft skin.

Feeling more grounded, he reached down and pulled at Brian’s hips. Brian pushed himself up, spreading his knees as he did. Justin’s dick jumped against his stomach and he moaned deep in his chest. The sight of Brian spread before him was hotter than any masturbatory fantasy could ever be. He reached down to spread Brian’s cheeks and Brian let out a long, hissing breath before Justin’s mouth ever reached him.

Justin leaned in, inhaling the scent of Brian before he began to lick, his tongue hard and flat against Brian’s hole. This time Brian’s hiss was an intake of breath. Spurred on by the sound, Justin continued licking and sucking and nipping at Brian’s ass, stopping only to wet two fingers in his mouth before adding them to the mix. Justin’s face was wet and Brian’s ass was wetter and was all deliciously messy and Justin couldn’t imagine anything sexier.

As his first finger slid into Brian, so tight and so impossibly warm, Justin moved his other hand up Brian’s back, feeling him jerk beneath him. He added another finger, slowly at first, then moving faster as Brian’s moans filled the room. When Justin shuffled back down to suck Brian’s balls into his mouth, still pumping his fingers in and out of his ass, Brian grabbed his own dick, tugging it in tandem with Justin’s fingers, his balls pulling against the suction of Justin’s mouth.

Suddenly Justin pulled his fingers out of Brian’s ass and moved back up to line his cock against his hole. He had to be inside Brian. Now. He pushed in slowly and Brian pushed back hard against him, wanting the pain that slid itself slowly around the pleasure, adding to the heat that was building in his balls as he continued to jack himself off.

The only sounds in the loft were the moans and half-spoken grunts that never became real words. Justin pulled back and slammed into Brian, amazed at the tightness, the heat enveloping his cock. His pace was frenzied and his technique was non-existent, but neither of them cared. Justin’s head fell back as he felt his balls tighten and then he was coming, coming hard inside Brian. He felt Brian clench around him tighter than ever and then moan loudly as he came too, jerking under Justin.

Justin’s hips finally slowed and he slumped over Brian a bit, feeling like his bones had turned to liquid. He’d never be able to move again, he was sure of that. Finally, he pressed a kiss against Brian’s spine before he pulled out and flopped onto the bed beside him. Brian turned slowly onto his back beside him, letting out a long groan as he did. They lay, barely touching, for a long time, as daylight faded around them.
 
 
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on April 18th, 2009 10:13 pm (UTC)
It may be hard, but your really fucking good at it! You must never stop!

I love how you started this... the bit about Justin's fantasies before Brian was great and then Brian comes home and finds him and that part is just GUH!

And then:

Brian leaned over Justin and kissed him, slow and sexy, just like he’d smiled at him before, then raised back up and rolled the condom down Justin’s dick.

I love this because it is completely without words but still pretty direct which is just perfectly Brian.

The whole things is just wonderful!
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:47 am (UTC)
(((hugs)))) Thank you so much...I love specific feedback like this. I decided to take the prompt literally and have no words at all, which seems like people enjoyed.
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[info]pour_us_a_road on April 18th, 2009 10:35 pm (UTC)
Your porn was wonderful! Loved it all.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:47 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reading and leaving feedback.

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1bongo1[info]1bongo1 on April 18th, 2009 10:43 pm (UTC)
I've always imagined that Brian would not be able to resist Justin if he was putting on a show for him. Thanks for proving me right!
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:48 am (UTC)
You are more than welcome. I don't think Brian can resist Justin *any* time... :D
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[info]sjmpets on April 18th, 2009 10:48 pm (UTC)
your mind must be going a mile a minute.

you're very good at this.it was so hot.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:50 am (UTC)
LOL. You'd think that B/J are in my mind 24/7, but I do have to make them leave occasionally.

Thank you for reading and for commenting, it means a lot to me!
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frantic_quest: toppy justin[info]frantic_quest on April 18th, 2009 11:16 pm (UTC)
When the kiss finally broke, leaving Justin absolutely breathless, he moved off Brian and pushed at him gently until Brian rolled over, spreading his legs slightly. His head turned to the side as he settled into his own folded arms. Justin knelt between his thighs, running his hands up from the backs of his knees to his ass, watching Brian’s face flush slightly as he did.

This paints such a gorgeous picture in my mind!

Very tasty porn!!
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:51 am (UTC)
I *love* when readers love what they "see" when I write something...thank you for reading and for commenting!
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rosy5000: Justin Face of God[info]rosy5000 on April 19th, 2009 12:09 am (UTC)
Very sexy. I love that neither ever spoke a word. Made it even more beautiful. :)
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:51 am (UTC)
(((hugs))) Thank you...I liked the idea of no words at all too.
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ahaw9913: B/J  Toppy!Justin On Brian's Back[info]ahaw9913 on April 19th, 2009 12:48 am (UTC)
He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.

RAWR!

Only when he lifted his head back up to watch his hand working at his dick did he see Brian, leaning against the door frame, watching him.

Justin's unrepentant, unashamed sluttiness sexuality is just so freaking HOT!

Justin’s face was wet and Brian’s ass was wetter and was all deliciously messy and Justin couldn’t imagine anything sexier.

Damn, you and me both!

wanting the pain that slid itself slowly around the pleasure

Beautiful imagery!!

Maybe it being hard brings out the best in your writing, cause this is amazingly wonderful!


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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:54 am (UTC)
Hehehe. I totally have a kink for Brian as Mr. Kinney, so I had to throw in that little fantasy for Justin...

Thank you so much for this lovely, wordy feedback. I love knowing what parts people really like!
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Michi: versatile[info]michira_70 on April 19th, 2009 03:33 am (UTC)
Don't ever stop to write porn! This is great and so hothothot!
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:54 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. :D
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[info]claddagh_girl on April 19th, 2009 04:54 am (UTC)
I think the flush that spread through Brian's skin while Justin was being gentle with him was my favorite part, although the entire thing was really great!
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:55 am (UTC)
Ohhh! You just totally made my day, I liked that little bit too. Thank you!
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kari: Justin 108 on to you[info]kari77 on April 19th, 2009 05:38 am (UTC)
Oh, this is really good. A fantasy becoming reality. Guh.
And it shows that they don't need words to get the point across.

Very delicious.
Thank you.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:56 am (UTC)
Once I got started, I really liked the idea of them not talking at all. I'm glad you did too. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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[info]jule1122 on April 19th, 2009 09:44 am (UTC)
I love the silence of this-how it build the mood and makes you feel the tension. Very erotic
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:56 am (UTC)
(((hugs))) I'm glad that people are liking the silence. Thank you Jule!!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:58 am (UTC)
God I love it when you write for bj_action. It makes my day. This was wonderful.

Now all his fantasies all center on Brian. He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.

It's wrong that this thought turned me on too, isn't it? :X

The rest of it I'm not going to quote, or i'll quote too much. You do pwps so well darling.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:58 am (UTC)
Now all his fantasies all center on Brian. He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.

It's wrong that this thought turned me on too, isn't it? :X


No, it's very, very right. I added that little fantasy for myself...and anyone who loves that "Mr. Kinney" thing...

And thank you for lovely, lovely feedback. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.
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[info]dottie_jane on April 19th, 2009 01:20 pm (UTC)
This was pornilicious!
All your hard work really paid off because this was great.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:58 am (UTC)
Re: This was pornilicious!
Thank you so much...what a great thing to say!
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[info]shenova on April 19th, 2009 02:32 pm (UTC)
Actions speak louder then words with Brian and Justin and this fic just shows that. Justin getting himself ready for when Brian comes home and then when he does he lets Justin fuck him. No words are spoken it's just in the kisses and touches lovely. Wonderful writing me dear.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:59 am (UTC)
Thank you! I've been pleased at how much people seemed to like the silence between Brian and Justin in this.
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testdog65: [info]testdog65 on April 19th, 2009 03:36 pm (UTC)
Wow, that was meltingly hot. You wrapped the porn in a great story and the visuals were excellent! Also, this made me chuckle:

Now all his fantasies all center on Brian. He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.

~Ellen
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 11:59 am (UTC)
:-D That particular fantasy is a total favorite of mine, so I decided to sneak it in...

Thank you Ellen, for reading and leaving such nice feedback.
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happier_bunny: j fucking b[info]happier_bunny on April 19th, 2009 05:25 pm (UTC)
fkhksadhfslkjdsa;

YOU DID IT AND YOU MADE ME FEEL FAINT!

this is hot and sexy (i mean you worked in justin's uniform *swoons*) and no word, just communicating with looks, feel and actions. GUH GUH GUH.

It's hot from the jerking off to the kissing, to the rimming and straight on to the fucking. *dies*
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 12:01 pm (UTC)
*huge hugs and kisses*

THANK YOU FOR THE BUNNY! I didn't have him toss the condom to Justin, but I think it worked out all right. :D And the silence just seemed right once I started...I'm really glad you liked it. I couldn't have done it without you, which is SO OFTEN the case.
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secretsolitaire: toppy justin[info]secretsolitaire on April 19th, 2009 10:14 pm (UTC)
*brain shorts out* That is some gorgeous porn. I love that they don't say anything from start to finish -- seems just right for them.

He pushed in slowly and Brian pushed back hard against him, wanting the pain that slid itself slowly around the pleasure

Great description.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 12:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you so so much! I am really glad you liked that particular line...I thought it seemed right for what Brian would be feeling. (((hugs)))
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outlander: *comes* toes[info]outlander on April 20th, 2009 02:32 pm (UTC)
Oh dear god, woman. This was hot from start to finish, but the image of Brian's full body blush just about killed me. Like it or not, you are true Princess of Porn.
Guh.
I need a shower.
Srsly.
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 03:54 pm (UTC)
Like it or not, you are true Princess of Porn.

Geeeeez! Talk about blushing!!! *is all flustered*

*kisses you* Thank you for the lovely comments!
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sanami276[info]ohfreckle on April 20th, 2009 02:47 pm (UTC)
I absolutely loved this, no words are necessary for these two, they have their own language.
Wonderful, hot and lovely ♥
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[info]noteverything on April 20th, 2009 03:54 pm (UTC)
:D I like that...their own language. Thank you so much!!!

Hey, what do you think about my new default? ;-)
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sanami276[info]ohfreckle on April 21st, 2009 11:17 am (UTC)
Hmm, someone must have thought of you ;)
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[info]besamislabios on April 21st, 2009 10:54 am (UTC)
I'll hold your hand whenever you need it. ♥ Eventhough, IMHO, you do write porn very well!!

I had to reread it, and it's so good and hot, and just like I wanted it to be, I have my fantasies just like Justin does, lol.

He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.

Me too, hee, and I'm sure I've read that fic!!

*hugs*




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[info]noteverything on May 7th, 2009 10:45 pm (UTC)
You are the best.

Thank you. I hate this thing now, but I'm glad it was good for you! xoxoxo
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[info]besamislabios on May 11th, 2009 11:20 am (UTC)
Don't go hating the porn I helped you with, my fantasy was hot in my head, LOL. Anyway to me it's like that gift your kid makes you and it's not beautiful, nor perfect, but it's done with love and heart. That's how I feel about this, I had fun chatting over this, and it's a fond memory now, so it doesn't really matter if it's not the best porn ever. I love it!!



and you are the best too, we're the coolest! ;-)
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Britin: toppy!justin by sanami276[info]_alicesprings on April 23rd, 2009 06:39 pm (UTC)
asdfghgfdsadfghhagfdffggffff!!!! That was so freaking hot OMG! *explodes*
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[info]noteverything on May 7th, 2009 10:43 pm (UTC)
You are too, too kind to me. I *hate* my writing lately, but thank you!
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galeandrandy: French[info]galeandrandy on November 10th, 2009 06:46 am (UTC)
Set Me Reeling
This fic was rec'd to me and... *shivers* ...what a great way to start my night of reading off.

The sight of Brian spread before him was hotter than any masturbatory fantasy could ever be. Yes, I'm sure it was. And I was practically a pile of goo when I read that line. Then, you went and followed it up with this! He reached down to spread Brian’s cheeks and Brian let out a long, hissing breath before Justin’s mouth ever reached him. I had to take a moment before I could be coherent enough to keep reading.

One of my favorite things in the entire world of fic is when Brian just can't help but let Justin know he's anticipating what Justin is going to do to him, no matter how hard he tries to hold back, and especially when it involves rimming and him bottoming.

This was a wonderfully written story. I love little glimpses into Brian and Justin's lives that involve moments like this. Thank you for the good read. It was a perfect example of how great it is when B/J connect without words.

Rory

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[info]noteverything on February 8th, 2010 11:11 pm (UTC)
Re: Set Me Reeling
What wonderful, wonderful feedback to an old story! You *totally* made my day. Thank you!
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