It may be hard, but your really fucking good at it! You must never stop!
I love how you started this... the bit about Justin's fantasies before Brian was great and then Brian comes home and finds him and that part is just GUH!
And then:
Brian leaned over Justin and kissed him, slow and sexy, just like he’d smiled at him before, then raised back up and rolled the condom down Justin’s dick.
I love this because it is completely without words but still pretty direct which is just perfectly Brian.
The whole things is just wonderful!
(((hugs)))) Thank you so much...I love specific feedback like this. I decided to take the prompt literally and have no words at all, which seems like people enjoyed.
Your porn was wonderful! Loved it all.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reading and leaving feedback.
I've always imagined that Brian would not be able to resist Justin if he was putting on a show for him. Thanks for proving me right!
You are more than welcome. I don't think Brian can resist Justin *any* time... :D
your mind must be going a mile a minute.
you're very good at this.it was so hot.
LOL. You'd think that B/J are in my mind 24/7, but I do have to make them leave occasionally.
Thank you for reading and for commenting, it means a lot to me!
When the kiss finally broke, leaving Justin absolutely breathless, he moved off Brian and pushed at him gently until Brian rolled over, spreading his legs slightly. His head turned to the side as he settled into his own folded arms. Justin knelt between his thighs, running his hands up from the backs of his knees to his ass, watching Brian’s face flush slightly as he did.
This paints such a gorgeous picture in my mind!
Very tasty porn!!
I *love* when readers love what they "see" when I write something...thank you for reading and for commenting!
Very sexy. I love that neither ever spoke a word. Made it even more beautiful. :)
(((hugs))) Thank you...I liked the idea of no words at all too.
He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.
RAWR!
Only when he lifted his head back up to watch his hand working at his dick did he see Brian, leaning against the door frame, watching him.
Justin's unrepentant, unashamed sluttiness sexuality is just so freaking HOT!
Justin’s face was wet and Brian’s ass was wetter and was all deliciously messy and Justin couldn’t imagine anything sexier.
Damn, you and me both!
wanting the pain that slid itself slowly around the pleasure
Beautiful imagery!!
Maybe it being hard brings out the best in your writing, cause this is amazingly wonderful!
Hehehe. I totally have a kink for Brian as Mr. Kinney, so I had to throw in that little fantasy for Justin...
Thank you so much for this lovely, wordy feedback. I love knowing what parts people really like!
Don't ever stop to write porn! This is great and so hothothot!
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. :D
I think the flush that spread through Brian's skin while Justin was being gentle with him was my favorite part, although the entire thing was really great!
Ohhh! You just totally made my day, I liked that little bit too. Thank you!
Oh, this is really good. A fantasy becoming reality. Guh. And it shows that they don't need words to get the point across.
Very delicious. Thank you.
Once I got started, I really liked the idea of them not talking at all. I'm glad you did too. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
I love the silence of this-how it build the mood and makes you feel the tension. Very erotic
(((hugs))) I'm glad that people are liking the silence. Thank you Jule!!
God I love it when you write for bj_action. It makes my day. This was wonderful.
Now all his fantasies all center on Brian. He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.
It's wrong that this thought turned me on too, isn't it? :X
The rest of it I'm not going to quote, or i'll quote too much. You do pwps so well darling.
Now all his fantasies all center on Brian. He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.
It's wrong that this thought turned me on too, isn't it? :X
No, it's very, very right. I added that little fantasy for myself...and anyone who loves that "Mr. Kinney" thing...
And thank you for lovely, lovely feedback. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.
All your hard work really paid off because this was great.
Thank you so much...what a great thing to say!
Actions speak louder then words with Brian and Justin and this fic just shows that. Justin getting himself ready for when Brian comes home and then when he does he lets Justin fuck him. No words are spoken it's just in the kisses and touches lovely. Wonderful writing me dear.
Thank you! I've been pleased at how much people seemed to like the silence between Brian and Justin in this.
Wow, that was meltingly hot. You wrapped the porn in a great story and the visuals were excellent! Also, this made me chuckle:
Now all his fantasies all center on Brian. He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.
~Ellen
:-D That particular fantasy is a total favorite of mine, so I decided to sneak it in...
Thank you Ellen, for reading and leaving such nice feedback.
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YOU DID IT AND YOU MADE ME FEEL FAINT!
this is hot and sexy (i mean you worked in justin's uniform *swoons*) and no word, just communicating with looks, feel and actions. GUH GUH GUH.
It's hot from the jerking off to the kissing, to the rimming and straight on to the fucking. *dies*
*huge hugs and kisses*
THANK YOU FOR THE BUNNY! I didn't have him toss the condom to Justin, but I think it worked out all right. :D And the silence just seemed right once I started...I'm really glad you liked it. I couldn't have done it without you, which is SO OFTEN the case.
*brain shorts out* That is some gorgeous porn. I love that they don't say anything from start to finish -- seems just right for them.
He pushed in slowly and Brian pushed back hard against him, wanting the pain that slid itself slowly around the pleasure
Great description.
Thank you so so much! I am really glad you liked that particular line...I thought it seemed right for what Brian would be feeling. (((hugs)))
Oh dear god, woman. This was hot from start to finish, but the image of Brian's full body blush just about killed me. Like it or not, you are true Princess of Porn. Guh. I need a shower. Srsly.
Like it or not, you are true Princess of Porn.
Geeeeez! Talk about blushing!!! *is all flustered*
*kisses you* Thank you for the lovely comments!
I absolutely loved this, no words are necessary for these two, they have their own language. Wonderful, hot and lovely ♥
:D I like that...their own language. Thank you so much!!!
Hey, what do you think about my new default? ;-)
Hmm, someone must have thought of you ;)
I'll hold your hand whenever you need it. ♥ Eventhough, IMHO, you do write porn very well!!
I had to reread it, and it's so good and hot, and just like I wanted it to be, I have my fantasies just like Justin does, lol.
He doesn’t even need a scenario, although imagining detention with Mr. Kinney as his math teacher makes him hard instantly.
Me too, hee, and I'm sure I've read that fic!!
*hugs*
You are the best.
Thank you. I hate this thing now, but I'm glad it was good for you! xoxoxo
Don't go hating the porn I helped you with, my fantasy was hot in my head, LOL. Anyway to me it's like that gift your kid makes you and it's not beautiful, nor perfect, but it's done with love and heart. That's how I feel about this, I had fun chatting over this, and it's a fond memory now, so it doesn't really matter if it's not the best porn ever. I love it!!
♥
and you are the best too, we're the coolest! ;-)
asdfghgfdsadfghhagfdffggffff!!!! That was so freaking hot OMG! *explodes*
You are too, too kind to me. I *hate* my writing lately, but thank you!
This fic was rec'd to me and... *shivers* ...what a great way to start my night of reading off.
The sight of Brian spread before him was hotter than any masturbatory fantasy could ever be. Yes, I'm sure it was. And I was practically a pile of goo when I read that line. Then, you went and followed it up with this! He reached down to spread Brian’s cheeks and Brian let out a long, hissing breath before Justin’s mouth ever reached him. I had to take a moment before I could be coherent enough to keep reading.
One of my favorite things in the entire world of fic is when Brian just can't help but let Justin know he's anticipating what Justin is going to do to him, no matter how hard he tries to hold back, and especially when it involves rimming and him bottoming.
This was a wonderfully written story. I love little glimpses into Brian and Justin's lives that involve moments like this. Thank you for the good read. It was a perfect example of how great it is when B/J connect without words.
Rory
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