You're my hero... you wrote it and it's not even crack! I'm seriously impressed!
He was so fucking close, and he knew it, Justin's tongue thrusting in and out as he fisted Brian's cock was more than he could take. He was open and wet and couldn't seem to stop focusing on the last time Justin had fucked him and god he wanted it he thought as his hands clenched the duvet and whatever the fuck was strewn all over it. He tried not to think about what it was. He was pretty sure he knew. And he damn well knew it wasn't Justin's doing.
Hot and hilarious!
i had no intention of writing anything...and then i spent 4 hours laying in bed trying to work out how this could not be crack. lol
thanks dear. :D
That is a freakin' scary-ass hotel. But this story is totally hilarious and hot! Excellent work, NY!!
Mirrors...viberating bed...spotlights...and rose petals...what's scary about that? hee.
thanks dear :D
That was fabulous. Just fantastic, lol.
glad you enjoyed it. thank you. :D
for a minute it sounded like they were in a honeymoon suite.
"I wanted to see you."
"On a bed of roses?" omg hysterical.
well, i suppose for some people this might be like a honeymoon suite, :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Perfect, perfect, perfect!!
"Brian. There's a fucking spot light over the bed."
LMAO
"It was burning my ass," he replied to Justin's what-the-fuck expression.
ROFLMAO
"Why did you turn on that fucking light?"
"I wanted to see you."
"On a bed of roses?" He mocked.
*snort* ow! my stomach hurts from laughing so hard.
Brilliant job!!
I'm so glad it cracked you up. :D Thanks for the awesome comments.
Brian needs to find the trick who recommended that hotel and Deb-slap them! lol
although, they did have amazing sex, so maybe it wasn't so bad. :D thank you for letting me know you read it.
LOL, that sounds like the honeymoon suite at the Bates Hotel from Psycho ;).
Hot and funny!
*gigglesnort* That was great!
:D I'm glad it gave you a giggle. Thanks :D
You are brilliant! How you took this cracky bunny and turned it into something so incredibly hot and not really cracky at all! That's genius.
"Brian. There's a fucking spot light over the bed."
"It's called recessed lighting." *bwahaha*
Thank you!
Thank you for your lovely comments!
I spend a lot of time contemplating how to make cracky plots not cracky. I don't know why...it's a weird hobby.
When I heard that bunny, I thought "yeah, right! There's no way that won't be crack", but I'll be damned if you didn't do it. I'm seriously impressed! This was so hot, snarky, and so IC that if I hadn't known about the challenge beforehand I wouldn't have thought twice about the setting. Brava!
Thank you for your nice comments :D I'm glad it came out as not-cracky as it could.
That is exactly the kind of vacation the need. Full of fucking. Loved this: "Brian," Justin moaned as Brian pressed him against the door, his teeth grazing the back of his neck, one hand gripping the soft blond strands of hair so that he could tilt his head to the side for better access, while the other one reached between his legs and palmed his balls, fingers stroking the base of his already hard cock.
I agree! so do they I think. :D Thanks dear.
How I love thee. Let me count the ways.
I cannot believe that you actually made that work. I am in awe of you my love! I smiled through this whole fic (and cracked up that Brian didn't want to be teased about his taste in tricks. bwhahahhaha)
So he complied without comment, turning over onto his knees and elbows and was rewarded with the sweet sensation of Justin's hot wet tongue slowly opening his hole.
He was so fucking close, and he knew it, Justin's tongue thrusting in and out as he fisted Brian's cock was more than he could take. He was open and wet and couldn't seem to stop focusing on the last time Justin had fucked him and god he wanted it he thought as his hands clenched the duvet and whatever the fuck was strewn all over it. He tried not to think about what it was. He was pretty sure he knew. And he damn well knew it wasn't Justin's doing.
HOT HOT HOT and oh so brilliantly executed.
Ok, what do you want as your prize?
*licks*
Ok, what do you want as your prize?
hmmm...eternal love and devotion? hee.
I'm glad I put a smile on your face. Please don't ever write cracky bunnies like that again. You have no idea how much of my life already spend trying to work out how something totally cracky could be written as not-crack.
*licks*
eternal love and devotion
This you will always have my lovely Ny!
I swear, I didn't really think anyone would take that seriously but the fact that you wrote it just for me fills me with love...and glee.
However, I promise that next time I have a cracky idea like that, I'll warn you first so you don't have to be shocked at least. XOXOXO
i know you didn't mean that plot seriously...but i don't know, it was very inspirational :D
Great job! You had me at "when Brian slid his hand into Justin's hair and tugged, pulling his head up, their eyes locked in the reflection for a split second before Justin took in the whole image and came so hard Brian was the one seeing stars." (the quote button doesn't work in Google Chrome for some reason)
I'm glad you liked this and thank you so much for letting me know! :D
I cannot believe you accomplished that. Bravo! I'm not sure which I enjoyed more - the porn or the hilarity of the hotel. I could see the whole thing unfolding as I was reading. Brilliant!
~Ellen
I knew bunny was totally joking when she wrote it...but then i was laying around all morning trying to figure out how to do it and once I did i had to write it...so i'm glad it didn't come out too much of a disaster :D
i can totally picture them there now, and it cracks me up...so i'm glad my fic pretty much did that for you.
thanks ellen!
Hot and absolutely hilarious! Nicely done. :-D
Okay, let me guess...Emmett suggested the hotel. rotfl
Damn, this was hot!!!
You Win, You Win, You totally Win at everything. I was joking about rose petals and spotlights all week, but you pulled it off. Funny, smoking sexy hot and sooo IC. Did I mention you win?
YAY! I love winning :D
I didn't know you were joking about them all week...i just saw bunny's post and it stuck in my head.
I'm glad you liked it.
Brians burnt ass almost sent me into hysterics *snorfles*
Absolutely awesome, and did I mention hot? ♥
well bunny was the one who wanted brian's ass burnt, so we shall have to give her the credit. but i'm so glad you enjoyed it :D and btw, in case you didn't see it on your post. I LOVE that icon. it's so frakking pretty.
omg, Ny, you wrote it, and it's so not cracky!! Bravo!!
I love it all. :D |