18 April 2009 @ 10:14 pm
Theme #12: Without Words - Fic 2 of 5  
Title: Bed of Roses

Author: [info]not_yet_defined

A/N: Bunny asked for - Brian ass up on a bed of rose petals under a spotlight, begging for it. So don't blame me for the this. Dedicated to my darling [info]happier_bunny



"Brian. There's a fucking spot light over the bed."

"It's called recessed lighting."

Justin shot him an incredulous look. "Who recommended this place to you again?"

"A client." Brian lied as he pushed past Justin to drop his bag near the closet. It was bad enough he was going to have to stay in the tackiest hotel on earth for at least a night, he didn't need to be harassed about his bad taste in tricks as well. Oh christ, he thought, as he turned around and caught sight of the wall of mirrors. Justin walked further into the room and started to turn, but before he could see the monstrosity Brian flicked off the light.

"Brian?"

Brian shoved him onto the bed and promptly joined him there. Lips finding his neck in the dark. "It has a bed, what does the rest matter?"

As his hand worked the buttons on Justin's jeans, Justin responded by sliding further up on to said bed.

Minutes later his hand flew up to grip the headboard and accidently pressed a button of some sort attached to the wood. The world shook.

Literally.

A peal of laughter rang out in the night.

Followed by a defeated sigh.

Nevertheless, they didn't wind up leaving the hotel. In the morning, when Brian slid his hand into Justin's hair and tugged, pulling his head up, their eyes locked in the reflection for a split second before Justin took in the whole image and came so hard Brian was the one seeing stars.

They decided to remain with the understanding that there would be no photographic evidence of the room nor would they ever admit to having stayed here.

Later that night they were mid-fuck when Brian abruptly pulled out and got off the bed. He walked over to the lighting panel and left every thing on except the "recessed" light above the bed.

"It was burning my ass," he replied to Justin's what-the-fuck expression.

By the end of their stay they had gotten over the horror of their accommodations and gotten in to the spirit of the place. It was built for fucking, and in the end neither of them could really find anything too objectionable in that. And they were in the middle of fucking no where, so it wasn't like they were worried about being spotted.

So it wasn't surprising that they initially took no notice of the rose petals trailing a path from the door to the bed....

"Brian," Justin moaned as Brian pressed him against the door, his teeth grazing the back of his neck, one hand gripping the soft blond strands of hair so that he could tilt his head to the side for better access, while the other one reached between his legs and palmed his balls, fingers stroking the base of his already hard cock.

He dropped his hand from Justin's head long enough to retrieve the access card from his pocket and tried to open the door. He failed three times before Justin snatched the card from his hand and released the lock.

They stumbled into the room, hastily pulling off their own shirts, kicking off their shoes. Justin paused, leaning against the couch to pull off his socks. He nearly registered the different texture against the skin of his barefoot, soft and silky, but Brian, whose clothes always seemed to magically disappear the man could disrobe so fast, was already tackling him against the couch. Justin bit at his lower lip, sucking it between his own, teasing the edge with his tongue and relishing the feel of Brian growling against his mouth.

They moved backwards towards the bed, neither one cognizant of the petals beneath their feet.

Brian dropped to his knees and took Justin's cock into his mouth, pulling him all the way to the back of his throat without preamble. His hands gripped Justin's hips as he swallowed around him, holding him steady as Justin's legs nearly buckled at the sudden intensity of the sensation wrapped around his dick.

Justin rested one hand on the top of Brian's head, curling his fingers in his hair and ever so slightly thrusting his hips as Brian's lips moved up and down his cock, his tongue circling around the head when pulled back, and his throat swallowing around it when pushed in.

He couldn't take it any longer and thrust more forcefully into Brian's mouth, coming hard down his throat.

Brian stood up a few seconds later, with plans of fucking Justin's tight little ass into tomorrow for the next act and was somewhat surprised when Justin aggressively pushed him down onto the bed.

That's when he felt them. "What the fuck is..." he started to say but the words died on his lips when Justin returned the favor and swallowed him whole. When his finger began circling his hole, Brian planted his feet on matress, and slightly lifted up for better access. He wasn't surprised when Justin's mouth left his cock and traveled on, circling his hole where his finger had been.

"Turn over."

Brian glanced down at Justin. But it was dark, and the look had no effect if Justin couldn't see it, and aside from that he wanted Justin's tongue back inside his ass and a little rimming didn't necessarily mean that Justin was going to fuck him.

So he complied without comment, turning over onto his knees and elbows and was rewarded with the sweet sensation of Justin's hot wet tongue slowly opening his hole.

He was so fucking close, and he knew it, Justin's tongue thrusting in and out as he fisted Brian's cock was more than he could take. He was open and wet and couldn't seem to stop focusing on the last time Justin had fucked him and god he wanted it he thought as his hands clenched the duvet and whatever the fuck was strewn all over it. He tried not to think about what it was. He was pretty sure he knew. And he damn well knew it wasn't Justin's doing.

He groaned as he felt Justin pull back. He involuntarily thrust back against him when he felt Justin move up his back, his hard cock sliding against his ass. "You want me to fuck you?" Justin whispered against his back.

Brian just grunted in response, and pushed back against his fingers when they pressed against his hole. Justin worked two gently inside of Brian. He bit his lip at the burn but continued pushing back, seeking more.

After a few minutes Justin pulled away and got off the bed, Brian followed his form in the darkness with interest, squinting when Justin flicked on the spotlight over the bed. He looked down. Fucking rose petals.

Justin bit his lip as he moved back behind Brian, stroking a condom down over his cock. It was impossible for this hotel to get anymore cheesy and ridiculous but it didn't mean that Brian didn't look amazing on his arms and knees, sweaty and wanting, and surrounded by sea of deep red petals on the cream colored duvet.

He pushed inside the tight wet heat that was Brian and Brian pushed back against him. His head dropped to the mattress, his fist clenching petals and fabric as Justin moved faster and deeper with each thrust. He came, his ass tightening around Justin's cock as he did, bringing him along with him.

Justin rested for a minute, his forehead against Brian's back as the sweat on both of them began to cool. He pulled out as gently as he could and then flopped down on his back next to Brian, closing his eyes against the bright light as he removed the condom and dropped it on the floor.

Brian flipped over with a moan and turned his head to the side, shielding his eyes with his hand and glancing at a very satisfied looking Justin. He reached over and flicked a petal from his chest. "Why did you turn on that fucking light?"

"I wanted to see you."

"On a bed of roses?" He mocked.

"No. Just you. These petals are fucking everywhere," he griped as he pulled one from the crack of his ass with a look of distaste. "And your're right, that thing burns your ass."

Brian laughed. "We're never coming back here again."

"Thank fucking god for that."
 
 
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on April 18th, 2009 10:07 pm (UTC)
You're my hero... you wrote it and it's not even crack! I'm seriously impressed!

He was so fucking close, and he knew it, Justin's tongue thrusting in and out as he fisted Brian's cock was more than he could take. He was open and wet and couldn't seem to stop focusing on the last time Justin had fucked him and god he wanted it he thought as his hands clenched the duvet and whatever the fuck was strewn all over it. He tried not to think about what it was. He was pretty sure he knew. And he damn well knew it wasn't Justin's doing.

Hot and hilarious!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:39 am (UTC)
i had no intention of writing anything...and then i spent 4 hours laying in bed trying to work out how this could not be crack. lol

thanks dear. :D
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[info]noteverything on April 18th, 2009 10:25 pm (UTC)
That is a freakin' scary-ass hotel. But this story is totally hilarious and hot! Excellent work, NY!!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:41 am (UTC)
Mirrors...viberating bed...spotlights...and rose petals...what's scary about that? hee.

thanks dear :D
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[info]pour_us_a_road on April 18th, 2009 10:37 pm (UTC)
That was fabulous. Just fantastic, lol.
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:42 am (UTC)
glad you enjoyed it. thank you. :D
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1bongo1[info]1bongo1 on April 18th, 2009 10:40 pm (UTC)
Oh boy, that was fun!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:43 am (UTC)
Thanks! :D
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[info]sjmpets on April 18th, 2009 10:41 pm (UTC)
for a minute it sounded like they were in a honeymoon suite.

"I wanted to see you."

"On a bed of roses?" omg hysterical.
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:44 am (UTC)
well, i suppose for some people this might be like a honeymoon suite, :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
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frantic_quest: next morning[info]frantic_quest on April 18th, 2009 11:05 pm (UTC)
Perfect, perfect, perfect!!

"Brian. There's a fucking spot light over the bed."

LMAO

"It was burning my ass," he replied to Justin's what-the-fuck expression.

ROFLMAO

"Why did you turn on that fucking light?"

"I wanted to see you."

"On a bed of roses?" He mocked.


*snort* ow! my stomach hurts from laughing so hard.

Brilliant job!!




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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:45 am (UTC)
I'm so glad it cracked you up. :D Thanks for the awesome comments.
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rosy5000: BJ toppy J close[info]rosy5000 on April 18th, 2009 11:59 pm (UTC)
Brian needs to find the trick who recommended that hotel and Deb-slap them! lol
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:50 am (UTC)
although, they did have amazing sex, so maybe it wasn't so bad. :D thank you for letting me know you read it.
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Michi: versatile[info]michira_70 on April 19th, 2009 03:27 am (UTC)
LOL, that sounds like the honeymoon suite at the Bates Hotel from Psycho ;).

Hot and funny!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:51 am (UTC)
lol. thank you :D
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[info]claddagh_girl on April 19th, 2009 05:03 am (UTC)
*gigglesnort*
That was great!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:52 am (UTC)
:D I'm glad it gave you a giggle. Thanks :D
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kari: Brian Justin 110 hotelsex[info]kari77 on April 19th, 2009 05:31 am (UTC)
You are brilliant! How you took this cracky bunny and turned it into something so incredibly hot and not really cracky at all!
That's genius.

"Brian. There's a fucking spot light over the bed."

"It's called recessed lighting."

*bwahaha*

Thank you!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:54 am (UTC)
Thank you for your lovely comments!

I spend a lot of time contemplating how to make cracky plots not cracky. I don't know why...it's a weird hobby.
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ahaw9913: B/J  Toppy!Justin On Brian's Front[info]ahaw9913 on April 19th, 2009 08:24 am (UTC)
When I heard that bunny, I thought "yeah, right! There's no way that won't be crack", but I'll be damned if you didn't do it. I'm seriously impressed! This was so hot, snarky, and so IC that if I hadn't known about the challenge beforehand I wouldn't have thought twice about the setting. Brava!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:54 am (UTC)
Thank you for your nice comments :D I'm glad it came out as not-cracky as it could.
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[info]jule1122 on April 19th, 2009 09:51 am (UTC)
That is exactly the kind of vacation the need. Full of fucking. Loved this:
"Brian," Justin moaned as Brian pressed him against the door, his teeth grazing the back of his neck, one hand gripping the soft blond strands of hair so that he could tilt his head to the side for better access, while the other one reached between his legs and palmed his balls, fingers stroking the base of his already hard cock.

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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 09:54 am (UTC)
I agree! so do they I think. :D Thanks dear.
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happier_bunny: bunny's hero[info]happier_bunny on April 19th, 2009 10:10 am (UTC)
How I love thee. Let me count the ways.

I cannot believe that you actually made that work. I am in awe of you my love! I smiled through this whole fic (and cracked up that Brian didn't want to be teased about his taste in tricks. bwhahahhaha)

So he complied without comment, turning over onto his knees and elbows and was rewarded with the sweet sensation of Justin's hot wet tongue slowly opening his hole.

He was so fucking close, and he knew it, Justin's tongue thrusting in and out as he fisted Brian's cock was more than he could take. He was open and wet and couldn't seem to stop focusing on the last time Justin had fucked him and god he wanted it he thought as his hands clenched the duvet and whatever the fuck was strewn all over it. He tried not to think about what it was. He was pretty sure he knew. And he damn well knew it wasn't Justin's doing.


HOT HOT HOT and oh so brilliantly executed.

Ok, what do you want as your prize?

*licks*
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 10:17 am (UTC)
Ok, what do you want as your prize?

hmmm...eternal love and devotion? hee.

I'm glad I put a smile on your face. Please don't ever write cracky bunnies like that again. You have no idea how much of my life already spend trying to work out how something totally cracky could be written as not-crack.

*licks*
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happier_bunny: b/j 107 fingers joined[info]happier_bunny on April 19th, 2009 10:23 am (UTC)
eternal love and devotion

This you will always have my lovely Ny!

I swear, I didn't really think anyone would take that seriously but the fact that you wrote it just for me fills me with love...and glee.

However, I promise that next time I have a cracky idea like that, I'll warn you first so you don't have to be shocked at least. XOXOXO
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 06:46 pm (UTC)
i know you didn't mean that plot seriously...but i don't know, it was very inspirational :D


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[info]dottie_jane on April 19th, 2009 01:03 pm (UTC)
Great job! You had me at "when Brian slid his hand into Justin's hair and tugged, pulling his head up, their eyes locked in the reflection for a split second before Justin took in the whole image and came so hard Brian was the one seeing stars." (the quote button doesn't work in Google Chrome for some reason)

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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked this and thank you so much for letting me know! :D
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testdog65: B/J 107 fuck[info]testdog65 on April 19th, 2009 03:46 pm (UTC)
I cannot believe you accomplished that. Bravo! I'm not sure which I enjoyed more - the porn or the hilarity of the hotel. I could see the whole thing unfolding as I was reading. Brilliant!

~Ellen
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 06:45 pm (UTC)
I knew bunny was totally joking when she wrote it...but then i was laying around all morning trying to figure out how to do it and once I did i had to write it...so i'm glad it didn't come out too much of a disaster :D

i can totally picture them there now, and it cracks me up...so i'm glad my fic pretty much did that for you.

thanks ellen!
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secretsolitaire: brian smile[info]secretsolitaire on April 19th, 2009 10:26 pm (UTC)
Hot and absolutely hilarious! Nicely done. :-D
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 20th, 2009 08:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you dear!
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vlredreign: Justin's Chew Toy[info]vl_redreign on April 20th, 2009 01:38 am (UTC)
Okay, let me guess...Emmett suggested the hotel. rotfl

Damn, this was hot!!!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 20th, 2009 08:35 pm (UTC)
thanks red!
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outlander: *comes* toes[info]outlander on April 20th, 2009 02:28 pm (UTC)
You Win, You Win, You totally Win at everything.
I was joking about rose petals and spotlights all week, but you pulled it off. Funny, smoking sexy hot and sooo IC.
Did I mention you win?
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 20th, 2009 08:38 pm (UTC)
YAY! I love winning :D

I didn't know you were joking about them all week...i just saw bunny's post and it stuck in my head.

I'm glad you liked it.
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sanami276[info]ohfreckle on April 20th, 2009 02:44 pm (UTC)
Brians burnt ass almost sent me into hysterics *snorfles*

Absolutely awesome, and did I mention hot? ♥
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 20th, 2009 08:39 pm (UTC)
well bunny was the one who wanted brian's ass burnt, so we shall have to give her the credit. but i'm so glad you enjoyed it :D and btw, in case you didn't see it on your post. I LOVE that icon. it's so frakking pretty.
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besamislabios: 110 Justin [info]besamislabios on April 21st, 2009 10:31 am (UTC)
omg, Ny, you wrote it, and it's so not cracky!! Bravo!!

I love it all. :D
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pendulumchanges: 110 - Justin in ecstasy[info]pendulumchanges on June 28th, 2015 03:11 am (UTC)
I don't know why I didn't leave a comment here back in 2009 when I most likely read this for the first time, but I just read it (again?) and it was awesome. The quality of writing in our little corner of the QAF fandom was always fantastic. I love the part where their eyes lock in the mirror :)
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on June 28th, 2015 03:39 am (UTC)
I like that I'm stalking your comments over here this evening. Although I saw this one on my email, and it took me awhile to figure out where you'd left it.

Don't feel bad for not commenting. I sincerely don't even remember writing this. When I reread it the other day, i had no idea what was going to happen!

Beware, this is what happens when you get old.
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pendulumchanges[info]pendulumchanges on June 28th, 2015 03:52 am (UTC)
This is seriously like the old days, with the comments flying, fast and furious. LOL you didn't know what was going to happen! I read one of my own fics and felt similarly. Didn't remember writing some of the lines at all.
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Ny: Mikey & B comic con ny[info]not_yet_defined on June 28th, 2015 03:56 am (UTC)
It is a bit like the old days. I'm so beyond glad you stopped by to play this evening. Although I've been having fun playing around in the world of QaF by myself the last few days, it is so much better when someone comes by and shares a little bit of the squee. And it is SO MUCH better when it is someone you haven't talked to in forever and miss!

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pendulumchanges[info]pendulumchanges on June 28th, 2015 04:07 am (UTC)
I have missed you too! I see you on facebook, but it's different over here on IJ. Going to sleep now. Will come back to squee some more this week :)
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on June 28th, 2015 04:10 am (UTC)
Please do stop by when you have time later in the week. I don't think I'll be disappearing for a while. I haven't been in a mood like this for QaF stuff in 5 years. good night!
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