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Theme #11: Public Sex // Sex in Public 3 of 10 [Feb. 16th, 2009|08:19 pm]
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TITLE: Fine Art
AUTHOR: [info]notreallyme10
A/N: Please excuse any inaccuracies about MOMA. Thank you to my beta [info]_alicesprings!



Walking around MOMA always does something to me. There are a million amazing galleries and museums in New York, but for me, there is something about MOMA that always gives me an excited, slightly queasy feeling. It was one of the first places I visited when I moved here, when I had that feeling all the time. When everything was exhilarating and new. I love it here but that feeling has slowly worn off, but it comes back every time I step foot in MOMA.

I've never brought Brian here before. His visits are usually so short that we don't have time to do much but fuck. But he's been here for a few days this time and when we woke up this morning, it just felt right to come here. He’s holding my hand and letting me go on and on about what I like and don't like. My ass aches from the two whole days of fucking we've already done and I'm almost certain I've never had a more perfect day.

I nuzzle my face into his neck a little.

"I'm so sore."

He loves that, loves hearing that I can feel him hours after we fuck. He loves that I love it.

"I want you to touch me."

He makes a little moaning noise deep in his throat.

"Don't tease me Justin."

I grab his hand and pull him off in the direction of a series of partitioned off rooms we passed earlier. The rooms are set up for a special series of films they've been showing here for the last few weeks. I came on the opening weekend and I wasn't that impressed so I suggested that we skip them. I have other plans now.

I peek into the first two rooms, but they both have a pretty full audience. I'm starting to think this isn't going to work, but the third little theater only has two people, both sitting alone and seemingly engrossed in the film.

I hold my finger to my lips, unnecessarily warning Brian to be quiet and then pull him just inside to the far back corner. It is surprisingly dark after the rest of the museum and my eyes struggle to adjust.

If we're absolutely quiet then we might actually manage to go undetected.

Brian's being surprisingly patient, just waiting for whatever I have planned... I slowly release the button on my jeans and then lower the zipper one tick at a time. I have Brian's full attention but no one else in the room has made any indication that they have noticed our presence.

I pull my jeans down just low enough to expose my ass and push it back towards Brian. He grips both cheeks firmly and kneads for just a second. He moves one hand away and then I feel him pulling my ass checks apart and his wet finger comes down on my sore hole. It feels really good and I hold my breath so I don't sigh out loud.

His finger plays around the sensitive skin for a minute and then moves away only to come back wetter.

My jeans are just below my hips and they prevent me from spreading wide for him. His finger pushes in and it feels tight and a little sharp with just spit for lube. He works it in and out slowly a few times and then only a moment later I hear the unmistakable crinkle of a condom wrapper.

I give a brief moment’s thought to how sad I'll be if I get permanently banned from MOMA.

But then he's pulling my pants lower so he can get my cock out and he's nudging his cock against my ass and I'm bending over to give him better access... and then he's inside.

This time I can't help but take a deep harsh breath, the feeling is overwhelming.

Immediately my eyes dart back and forth to the heads in front of me, certain one of them is going to turn around and catch us, but neither does.

Brian's hand comes down tightly over my mouth to quiet me. I can hardly get enough air through my nose, but it doesn't matter because this isn't going to last long. I can feel it starting already.

He pulls out once, all the way. Then enters me roughly a second time, pushing all the way in, holding himself deep inside me, one hand on my mouth not letting me moan and his other hand on my hip not letting me move.

The whole world narrows to the throbbing connection of my hole and his cock and I start to come. The deep painful spasms in my ass have him gripping me even tighter and then coming himself.

It's one of those painful orgasms that leaves me feeling all wrung out and completely satisfied. Brian lets his hand drop away from my mouth and I take a few deep but silent breaths.

I didn't even notice his other hand cupping my cock until he moves it away and brings it to my mouth to smear just a bit of my come across my lips before quickly and quietly cleaning the rest off with his own mouth.

He pulls out and we put ourselves back together as best as we can without making a sound. Brian holds the used condom up and gives me a questioning look. I shrug, not knowing what to do with it. He rolls his eyes and then carefully conceals it in his fist, presumably until we come across a trash can. It makes me laugh a little and one of the men in the room glances back at me for the first time.

We've probably been in here for less than ten minutes but I think it is time to move along before we push our luck so I lead the way back out into the light.

Luckily there is a trash can just around the corner and we dispose of the evidence.

As we wander back into one of the larger rooms he wraps his arms around my chest from behind.

"I'm thinking tomorrow we should visit the Guggenheim."

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[User Picture]From: [info]noteverything
2009-02-16 10:03 pm (UTC)

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Funny and hot, best combo ever!

This made me crack up: I give a brief moment’s thought to how sad I'll be if I get permanently banned from MOMA.

And the HOTTEST of hotness:
I didn't even notice his other hand cupping my cock until he moves it away and brings it to my mouth to smear just a bit of my come across my lips before quickly and quietly cleaning the rest off with his own mouth.


Woah. So good...thank you!!
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:21 pm (UTC)

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Some times I think I might be the only one who thinks I'm funny ;) I'm so glad that wasn't the case here! Thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]rosy5000
2009-02-16 10:09 pm (UTC)

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Now I have an intense urge to go to a museum and hope to run into Brian and Justin there. ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:22 pm (UTC)

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LOL! Perfect icon! Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]frantic_quest
2009-02-16 11:24 pm (UTC)

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OMG Museum sex is so hot! So their itinerary is the Guggenheim tomorrow & then....???

lol at thinking about Brian sitting there with the used condom in his fist and what he could have done with the used condom if there were no convenient trash cans around!
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:28 pm (UTC)

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lol, it drives me crazy to leave small details hanging... and I just had to figure out what they would do with the condom!
[User Picture]From: [info]michira_70
2009-02-17 01:07 am (UTC)

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This is sooo hot.
Who says a visit to the museum must be boring?
Not with B/J!!
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:28 pm (UTC)

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Thank you very much! I bet Brian and Justin even make the DMV fun ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]nerilka24
2009-02-17 01:42 am (UTC)

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woah, very nice! How come nothing like that ever happens when I go to the museum?
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:29 pm (UTC)

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Thanks! I've been to MOMA several times and nothing like that ever happened to me either ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]pye_wacket
2009-02-17 06:43 am (UTC)

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*Brian's hand comes down tightly over my mouth to quiet me*


now this is enough to make me want to take a cold shower!!
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:31 pm (UTC)

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LOL! Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]besamislabios
2009-02-17 07:08 am (UTC)

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I didn't even notice his other hand cupping my cock until he moves it away and brings it to my mouth to smear just a bit of my come across my lips before quickly and quietly cleaning the rest off with his own mouth.

This was so freaking hot! *melts*
Love the way how Justin leads Brian, searching for a place to fuck, the way they try to be quiet...everything.
Thank you for writing this piece. :D
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:38 pm (UTC)

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Yay! I'm so glad you liked it and that you are BACK!!! Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]bulagirl
2009-02-17 01:21 pm (UTC)

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*dies* This was so hot and funny at the same time; amazing story :)
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:39 pm (UTC)

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Thank you so much! It makes me especially happy that you think it was funny :)
[User Picture]From: [info]qafmaniac
2009-02-17 02:23 pm (UTC)

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This was oh sooooo good...and HOT!

I give a brief moment’s thought to how sad I'll be if I get permanently banned from MOMA.

Lol!!

"I'm thinking tomorrow we should visit the Guggenheim."

ROFL!

I love funny and HOT.



[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:40 pm (UTC)

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I'm so glad you thought it was funny and hot! Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]outlander
2009-02-17 02:38 pm (UTC)

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He loves that, loves hearing that I can feel him hours after we fuck. He loves that I love it.
"I want you to touch me."

OK, this is too hot for words. My upper lip is sweating. snort.

I give a brief moment’s thought to how sad I'll be if I get permanently banned from MOMA. LMAO.

This was hot and hysterical and so them. I loved it. Thank you!!!

[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:42 pm (UTC)

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Might not be so hot if you weren't wrapped in bear skin... ehem. LOL!

Thank you so much!
[User Picture]From: [info]testdog65
2009-02-17 08:11 pm (UTC)

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Yay for museum!sex. :D This was fun and hot and such a lovely little snippet of their time together.

This image almost killed me, in a very good way:

He pulls out once, all the way. Then enters me roughly a second time, pushing all the way in, holding himself deep inside me, one hand on my mouth not letting me moan and his other hand on my hip not letting me move.

And the ending definitely made me laugh. Well done!

~Ellen
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:49 pm (UTC)

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Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[User Picture]From: [info]secretsolitaire
2009-02-17 08:44 pm (UTC)

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Guh, guh, GUH. You and I clearly share a kink...

He loves that, loves hearing that I can feel him hours after we fuck. He loves that I love it.

Mmmm.
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:49 pm (UTC)

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We definitely share that kink :) Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]sjmpets
2009-02-17 09:13 pm (UTC)

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can i go to MOMA the next time with them?

whew, it's hot in here.
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-17 09:52 pm (UTC)

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LOL! I love MOMA, but I have a feeling it would be even better with them there :) Thanks!
[User Picture]From: [info]sexy_pumpkin
2009-02-18 03:31 am (UTC)

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Hi ya *waves*

I just had to read your new fic, as usual you didn't disappoint, hot as hell & so full of the B&J love.

Hope your well, just had to comment, LOVED it,,hugs Jx
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-18 10:52 am (UTC)

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Awww, thanks! It is so good to see you pop up! I hope you have been well :) I always have fun writing a little something for the action challenges! Glad you had fun with it!
[User Picture]From: [info]minuet9
2009-02-18 05:02 am (UTC)

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That was so good :) Funny, hot and so IC :)


"I give a brief moment’s thought to how sad I'll be if I get permanently banned from MOMA."
This make me LOL.
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-18 10:54 am (UTC)

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Funny, hot and so IC :)

I couldn't ask for a better compliment! Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]claddagh_girl
2009-02-18 01:19 pm (UTC)

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I used to know lots of clever words, but after reading this, all I can come up with is "Oh my". Followed by copious amounts of drool.
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-18 08:04 pm (UTC)

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Yay! Thanks! I feel like we haven't caught up in forever... I hope all is well with you!
[User Picture]From: [info]shenova
2009-02-18 01:39 pm (UTC)

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Wow that was hot, Justin bored with looking at art well I never but that's what comes of only seeing each other for a few days. I love the last line. "I'm thinking tomorrow we should visit the Guggenheim."
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-18 08:04 pm (UTC)

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you had fun with it :)
[User Picture]From: [info]happier_bunny
2009-02-18 01:59 pm (UTC)

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Seriously this was beyond hot hot hot.

He’s holding my hand and letting me go on and on about what I like and don't like. My ass aches from the two whole days of fucking we've already done and I'm almost certain I've never had a more perfect day.

I nuzzle my face into his neck a little.

"I'm so sore."

He loves that, loves hearing that I can feel him hours after we fuck. He loves that I love it.

"I want you to touch me."

He makes a little moaning noise deep in his throat.

"Don't tease me Justin."


OMFG, teasing!Justin. I really don't think there's anything hotter. Oh wait, horny!Justin, he's pretty hot too.

I loved this so much. It feels so real. The easiness...yeah, that's it. There's an easiness to this that is exceptionally engaging. GUH!
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-18 08:06 pm (UTC)

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This comment made me so happy! Thank you very much! I can't tell you how glad I am that you liked it :) And thank you again for hosting this challenge... even though I felt like someone was pulling my teeth out while I was writing it :D
[User Picture]From: [info]kari77
2009-02-18 05:46 pm (UTC)

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Hmm, there is just something about having them fuck in an artsy environment.
This was so deliciously hot.

I give a brief moment’s thought to how sad I'll be if I get permanently banned from MOMA.
It's always good to have your priorities straight, Justin. *gg*

He pulls out once, all the way. Then enters me roughly a second time, pushing all the way in, holding himself deep inside me, one hand on my mouth not letting me moan and his other hand on my hip not letting me move.
Guhhhh! Yeah ... that.

As we wander back into one of the larger rooms he wraps his arms around my chest from behind.

"I'm thinking tomorrow we should visit the Guggenheim."

lol Perfect ending.

Thank you!
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-18 08:14 pm (UTC)

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Wow! Thank you very much!! Quotey feedback makes my day :D
[User Picture]From: [info]orange_fonts
2009-02-20 10:02 pm (UTC)

fine art

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First, I agree with everybody else's comments about the hotness :-D But I would like to quote some of my fave parts.

I've never brought Brian here before. His visits are usually so short that we don't have time to do much but fuck.

This is post 513 right? The visits are short but there are visits.. and this makes me happy *silly grin*

He’s holding my hand and letting me go on and on about what I like and don't like.

Don't know why I tend to zoom on things that seemed so mundane. When it comes to Brian and Justin, I am ridiculously romantic, I cherised even the small ordinary things some tends to take for granted. Maybe because in the show, yes they did showed "grandiose" proofs of love but for me (my opinion only ;-)) I would have wanted to see the little things, like those things in your fics especially in public or even just the people who matters (family, friends). Yes, yes I know they most of the time they make out infront of the whole of Pitts, but that seemed to be what is expected from Brian. I know Justin would argue (Brian, too, I think) with me that those stuff are just between the two of them, but still.. haayy.. ok don't mind me hahaha.

"I'm thinking tomorrow we should visit the Guggenheim."

Oh, the countless possibilities hahaha! Good work.
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-21 12:31 pm (UTC)

Re: fine art

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Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
[User Picture]From: [info]tootiredtosleep
2009-02-21 05:10 pm (UTC)

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So good! So real. So hot and wonderful. Thank you.
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-22 12:46 pm (UTC)

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Wow! Thank you :)