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Ny ([info]not_yet_defined) wrote in [info]bj_action,
@ 2008-09-24 19:17:00

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Entry tags:author: tweedygal, theme #10

Choose Your Own Adventure - 1 of 7
TITLE: Ready to Go
AUTHOR: [info]tweedygal
WARNINGS: It's porn, be warned.
A/N: This takes place at midnight in a studio on the PIFA campus, with snowballing of sorts. Thanks to my beta [info]jule122. I had some encouragement from [info]besamislabios and [info]dirtylttlescret. Otherwise I wouldn't have finished...



Brian tried to focus on the blowjob. The trick was hot. Gorgeous body, beautiful lips made for sucking cock. Which he did, unfortunately, very badly. Brian closed his eyes and tried to relax. When he felt his phone vibrate in his back pocket, he couldn't answer it fast enough.

"What?" he barked.

"Brian? I need you to come pick me up. I missed the bus back to the loft."

"I'm in the middle of something." Brian looked down at the trick. The middle of nothing was more like it.

"Please? I don't have cab fare. Daphne isn't picking up. I lost track of time…" Justin sounded tired and a little plaintive. Brian relented a bit.

"I'll be there in 20 minutes. Be waiting." Brian said gruffly. "I'm not waiting for you."

"I'll be ready." Justin said. "Thanks. I owe you. Again."

Brian hung up the phone and said, "That's it, Mr. Hoover. We're done." He pushed the trick away, ignoring his protests as he left the back room.

*****************

The art building was mostly dark when Brian pulled up just after midnight, but the front entrance was well-lit, and Brian expected to see Justin waiting there for him. He shifted into park and and honked his horn. No Justin.

Brian heaved a sigh. "Stupid little fuck," he thought. "He's never where he's supposed to be." He waited impatiently, fingers drumming on the steering wheel. After a few minutes, he killed the engine and climbed out of the Jeep.

He called Justin, who picked up on the first ring. "Sorry," he said. "I didn't want to wait down there alone. I'll be there in a minute." Brian felt his anger at Justin fade at the vulnerability in his voice.

"Wait...where are you?"

"Second floor, the only studio with the light on."

"I'm coming up. Stay there."

Brian took the stairs. As he entered the large room, Justin was sitting on a sofa near the back, putting sketches into his portfolio.

"Hey," Brian said. Justin turned and flashed him a smile. At that, the very last of Brian's frustration vanished. He walked over and kissed Justin. Putting his portfolio aside, Justin wrapped his arms around Brian and said, "Thanks for coming."

"Ahhh, but I haven't come," Brian remarked. "Yet."

He kissed Justin again, his tongue tracing the contours of his lips before plunging into his mouth, tangling with Justin's. Justin's moaned into Brian's kiss, his hands reaching around Brian's neck, fingers curling into his hair, pulling his mouth closer. Brian's mouth left Justin's, his tongue trailing over his lips again, then moving down Justin's neck, licking and sucking his collarbone. He tugged at Justin's hoody, pulling it back to expose more of his shoulders.

Finally, Justin pulled away, unzipping his hoody and pulling off his t-shirt. He reached for Brian and began working at his clothes too. Brian let him take off his shirt and undershirt, but when Justin reached for the buttons on his jeans, Brian grabbed his hands in one of his and walked him backward to the sofa. He pushed Justin with his other hand until Justin sat, then let go.

Justin looked up at him coyly before he pulled Brian's hips closer. His hands ran over Brian's ass, and he brought one to the front to rub Brian's dick through his jeans. He kissed it through the denim, mouthing and rutting at it. It was hotter than anything the trick at Babylon had done. Grabbing his head, Brian tried not to buck into Justin's mouth.

"Damn, Justin." The words were out of his mouth before he even realized it. Justin didn't seem to hear, and continued his assault on Brian's crotch. After a while, he began to unbutton Brian's jeans, pushing them down Brian's legs so he could kick them off.

Justin mouthed at Brian's dick again, rubbing his face against it, inhaling his scent. His hands followed his mouth as he licked and sucked his balls, then his thighs, before finally wrapping his mouth around his cock. Brian's fingers tangled into Justin's hair, his hips matching the rhythm of Justin's mouth as he sucked.

Justin sucked him deeper and deeper until unable to hold back, Brian pushed harder, bumping the back of Justin's throat. Justin moaned around his dick, choking just a bit, and Brian's hands moved from his hair to the back of his neck. His hips began to jerk more erratically, and Justin held them tightly, feeling Brian's cock tense.

As he came, grunting and thrusting uncontrollably, Brian's hands relaxed, moving back to Justin's hair, only stroking softly now. Justin rested his head briefly against Brian's thigh, then tugged at him, pulling him down to kneel between his legs. Justin leaned in and kissed Brian, feeding his come into his mouth. Brian sucked at Justin's tongue, tasting himself mingled with the sweet taste of Justin. His tongue traced Justin's teeth, and he felt his cock hardening again. When the kiss ended, Brian leaned his forehead against Justin's.

"Damn." It was all he could manage.

"Now you've come," Justin chuckled.

Brian laughed. "I have. And you're about to."



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[info]not_yet_defined
2008-09-24 09:24 pm UTC (link)
Ahh, this made me grin start to finish. And the middle, guh.

There's something about the imagery of justin attacking brian's cock through his jeans that is just so hot. i very very much enjoyed that part, kthnx.

You left me wanting more. Great fic tweeds.

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:53 pm UTC (link)
(((hugs))) Thank you.

Hehehe...don't we always want more?

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-09-24 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Mmmmmm. Yummy!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Justin agrees. ;-)

Thanks!

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[info]pendulumchanges
2008-09-24 09:40 pm UTC (link)
Awesome! Of course I zone in on the part where Justin doesn't want to wait alone and Brian is sweet about it... I'm such a sucker for that kind of stuff! Great job friend :) *smackles*

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:54 pm UTC (link)
And I am very, very happy that you liked that part of the story. I do too...

Thanks for commenting! :D *smackles*

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[info]rosy5000
2008-09-24 09:46 pm UTC (link)
Awww... Brian's so sweet for going to get Justin. ;) And one smile from Justin wipes away all of Brian's frustration. ;) The rest... as Brian said... DAMN! ;)

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:55 pm UTC (link)
Hehe...I liked that you quoted Brian!

And thank you so much for commenting.

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[info]notreallyme10
2008-09-24 10:54 pm UTC (link)
Guh! I love Brian going up to Justin's studio. And the last line is perfect!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:55 pm UTC (link)
*big smile* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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[info]dirtylttlescret
2008-09-25 12:23 am UTC (link)
Okay, NOW it's working...

I'm all tingly now and I think I need to change my underwear. I could see every single move.

I loved that Brian melted when Justin was too scared to meet him outside (it reminds me of 201-204 and protective Brian).

But finally, this line was full of win: "That's it, Mr. Hoover. We're done."

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:57 pm UTC (link)
lol...that line is cheesy, but it seemed like something Brian would say.

And I love, love protective!Brian, so I'm glad you like that part too. Along with the porn, of course.

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[info]nerilka24
2008-09-25 02:20 am UTC (link)
mmm sweet and hot, an excellent combination!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:57 pm UTC (link)
I like that combo too. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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[info]autumn_screams
2008-09-25 06:48 am UTC (link)
you just gave a whole new meaning to "HOT"...thank you so much

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:58 pm UTC (link)
It was my pleasure, I really enjoyed writing it! :-)

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[info]besamislabios
2008-09-25 10:10 am UTC (link)
This made me smile, it's so sweet:

"Hey," Brian said. Justin turned and flashed him a smile. At that, the very last of Brian's frustration vanished. He walked over and kissed Justin.

and this made me melt, it's so hot:

His hands ran over Brian's ass, and he brought one to the front to rub Brian's dick through his jeans. He kissed it through the denim, mouthing and rutting at it.

&hearts

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:59 pm UTC (link)
You give great feedback. Thank you, thank you! I like that combination of sweet and hot too.

xoxoxoxo. I still miss you...

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[info]qafmaniac
2008-09-25 12:42 pm UTC (link)
"Damn."

That's right!

Damn!

Damn HOT and damn GREAT!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-25 03:59 pm UTC (link)
Hehe...I get a kick out of people quoting Brian.

Thank you so much...I'm glad you enjoyed this. :D

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-09-25 06:39 pm UTC (link)
Oh happy happy joy joy.

This made me all warm and tingly. Most excellent. I think we need a sequel. ;)

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-26 04:10 pm UTC (link)
Ahhh, I wouldn't mind a sequel myself. ;-)

Thanks Bunny, I am glad you liked it!

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[info]catcayman
2008-09-25 08:03 pm UTC (link)
The porn is hot, and the rest just made me crack a big old smile. Great job. :D

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-26 04:12 pm UTC (link)
S2 Justin is a beautiful thing to behold and I think Brian would agree. :D Thanks for reading!!

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[info]xie_xie_xie
2008-09-26 02:40 pm UTC (link)
OH! Lovely! I adore PIFA!Justin!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-26 04:13 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, Xie. I like him too!

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[info]jule1122
2008-09-26 03:57 pm UTC (link)
I really love this part:
Justin looked up at him coyly before he pulled Brian's hips closer. His hands ran over Brian's ass, and he brought one to the front to rub Brian's dick through his jeans. He kissed it through the denim, mouthing and rutting at it. It was hotter than anything the trick at Babylon had done. Grabbing his head, Brian tried not to buck into Justin's mouth.
Just wonderful imagery. And I'm glad Brian's cock was safe!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-26 04:10 pm UTC (link)
And I'm glad Brian's cock was safe!

You just made me really LOL!! Oh, thank goodness I have you to help me, otherwise there's no telling what I'd have those two doing to each other. Thank you so much! *hugs*

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[info]1bongo1
2008-09-27 01:52 am UTC (link)
Brian going after Justin... works for me!

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-27 10:09 am UTC (link)
Oh me too -- definitely!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

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[info]singlewoman
2008-09-27 12:42 pm UTC (link)
Loved this! "Vunerable" Justin getting Brian to pick him up was great. And this line cracked me up as being sooo Brian: That's it, Mr. Hoover. We're done."

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-27 02:24 pm UTC (link)
Hey...I haven't seen you around much lately. Thanks for reading!

I'm really glad you liked it. :D

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[info]testdog65
2008-09-27 04:17 pm UTC (link)
Hot and sweet at the same time! This one left me smiling. It made me feel a bit of the season 3 vibe, which is always a good thing. :D

~Ellen

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-29 04:22 pm UTC (link)
Thank you Ellen! It's always a thrill to me that you like *my* writing.

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[info]outlander
2008-09-29 09:40 am UTC (link)
"Hey," Brian said. Justin turned and flashed him a smile. At that, the very last of Brian's frustration vanished. He walked over and kissed Justin.
*melts*

-quote next SIX paragraphs here-
*dies of hotness*

Brian's hands relaxed, moving back to Justin's hair, only stroking softly now. Justin rested his head briefly against Brian's thigh, then tugged at him, pulling him down to kneel between his legs.
*melts again*

This was wonderful.

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-29 05:02 pm UTC (link)
Well, that just made my day! *hugs* Thank you!!

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[info]suze_y
2008-09-30 09:15 am UTC (link)
Aww -- what a lovely combination of sweet and hot. I love Brian's progression from "barking" to "gruff" to completely relenting and protective. And the rest... as others have already said so well: "Guh!" :D

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[info]noteverything
2008-09-30 10:56 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I really had fun writing about this and just can't *resist* protective!Brian.

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[info]nyxa
2008-10-03 07:28 pm UTC (link)
I'm only just getting around to reading these, but I'm thinking it was worth the wait. ;) I have to agree with Brian and everyone else - Damn. :D

Justin looked up at him coyly before he pulled Brian's hips closer. His hands ran over Brian's ass, and he brought one to the front to rub Brian's dick through his jeans. He kissed it through the denim, mouthing and rutting at it. It was hotter than anything the trick at Babylon had done. Grabbing his head, Brian tried not to buck into Justin's mouth.

Guh. No words for how hot I found this part.

This had sweet and hot and protective!Brian - what more could I want? :D

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[info]noteverything
2008-10-05 11:30 am UTC (link)
Well, thanks for coming back to read and for such wonderful feedback. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this. It was fun to write. :D

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[info]ohfreckle
2008-10-06 10:50 am UTC (link)
Ooooh, greedy!Justin and PIFA, what an excellent combination.

Yummy, I loved this one ;)

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[info]noteverything
2008-10-11 11:00 am UTC (link)
*hugs* Thank you...I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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[info]fun_demented
2008-12-13 03:14 pm UTC (link)
I am giving you a "poke" to let you know I've left feedback down below. You were not the IJ user to post this here, so I am not sure if you'll be notified of the comment. :)

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[info]fun_demented
2008-12-13 03:11 pm UTC (link)
"I'm coming up. Stay there."

Brian's always a hero, whether in ways large or small.

"Ahhh, but I haven't come," Brian remarked. "Yet."

A horny hero, without a doubt, but a hero nonetheless.

Justin sucked him deeper and deeper until unable to hold back, Brian pushed harder, bumping the back of Justin's throat. Justin moaned around his dick, choking just a bit, and Brian's hands moved from his hair to the back of his neck. His hips began to jerk more erratically, and Justin held them tightly, feeling Brian's cock tense.

Now, that's what I call good descriptive writing. Very VERY good.

Brian and Justin are lucky lucky men.

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[info]noteverything
2008-12-13 09:35 pm UTC (link)
*blushes* Sometimes I freak out a little when I go back and read the porny stuff I wrote...

But thank you! It's been fun to see comments on my old stuff. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Brian and Justin are lucky lucky men.

I certainly can't argue that point! :-D

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