Ahh, this made me grin start to finish. And the middle, guh.
There's something about the imagery of justin attacking brian's cock through his jeans that is just so hot. i very very much enjoyed that part, kthnx.
You left me wanting more. Great fic tweeds.
(((hugs))) Thank you.
Hehehe...don't we always want more?
Justin agrees. ;-)
Thanks!
Awesome! Of course I zone in on the part where Justin doesn't want to wait alone and Brian is sweet about it... I'm such a sucker for that kind of stuff! Great job friend :) *smackles*
And I am very, very happy that you liked that part of the story. I do too...
Thanks for commenting! :D *smackles*
Awww... Brian's so sweet for going to get Justin. ;) And one smile from Justin wipes away all of Brian's frustration. ;) The rest... as Brian said... DAMN! ;)
Hehe...I liked that you quoted Brian!
And thank you so much for commenting.
Guh! I love Brian going up to Justin's studio. And the last line is perfect!
*big smile* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Okay, NOW it's working...
I'm all tingly now and I think I need to change my underwear. I could see every single move.
I loved that Brian melted when Justin was too scared to meet him outside (it reminds me of 201-204 and protective Brian).
But finally, this line was full of win: "That's it, Mr. Hoover. We're done."
lol...that line is cheesy, but it seemed like something Brian would say.
And I love, love protective!Brian, so I'm glad you like that part too. Along with the porn, of course.
mmm sweet and hot, an excellent combination!
I like that combo too. Thanks for reading and commenting!
you just gave a whole new meaning to "HOT"...thank you so much
It was my pleasure, I really enjoyed writing it! :-)
This made me smile, it's so sweet:
"Hey," Brian said. Justin turned and flashed him a smile. At that, the very last of Brian's frustration vanished. He walked over and kissed Justin. and this made me melt, it's so hot:
His hands ran over Brian's ass, and he brought one to the front to rub Brian's dick through his jeans. He kissed it through the denim, mouthing and rutting at it.
&hearts
You give great feedback. Thank you, thank you! I like that combination of sweet and hot too.
xoxoxoxo. I still miss you...
"Damn."
That's right!
Damn!
Damn HOT and damn GREAT!
Hehe...I get a kick out of people quoting Brian.
Thank you so much...I'm glad you enjoyed this. :D
Oh happy happy joy joy.
This made me all warm and tingly. Most excellent. I think we need a sequel. ;)
Ahhh, I wouldn't mind a sequel myself. ;-)
Thanks Bunny, I am glad you liked it!
The porn is hot, and the rest just made me crack a big old smile. Great job. :D
S2 Justin is a beautiful thing to behold and I think Brian would agree. :D Thanks for reading!!
OH! Lovely! I adore PIFA!Justin!
Thanks, Xie. I like him too!
I really love this part: Justin looked up at him coyly before he pulled Brian's hips closer. His hands ran over Brian's ass, and he brought one to the front to rub Brian's dick through his jeans. He kissed it through the denim, mouthing and rutting at it. It was hotter than anything the trick at Babylon had done. Grabbing his head, Brian tried not to buck into Justin's mouth. Just wonderful imagery. And I'm glad Brian's cock was safe!
And I'm glad Brian's cock was safe!
You just made me really LOL!! Oh, thank goodness I have you to help me, otherwise there's no telling what I'd have those two doing to each other. Thank you so much! *hugs*
Brian going after Justin... works for me!
Oh me too -- definitely!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Loved this! "Vunerable" Justin getting Brian to pick him up was great. And this line cracked me up as being sooo Brian: That's it, Mr. Hoover. We're done."
Hey...I haven't seen you around much lately. Thanks for reading!
I'm really glad you liked it. :D
Hot and sweet at the same time! This one left me smiling. It made me feel a bit of the season 3 vibe, which is always a good thing. :D
~Ellen
Thank you Ellen! It's always a thrill to me that you like *my* writing.
"Hey," Brian said. Justin turned and flashed him a smile. At that, the very last of Brian's frustration vanished. He walked over and kissed Justin. *melts*
-quote next SIX paragraphs here- *dies of hotness*
Brian's hands relaxed, moving back to Justin's hair, only stroking softly now. Justin rested his head briefly against Brian's thigh, then tugged at him, pulling him down to kneel between his legs. *melts again*
This was wonderful.
Well, that just made my day! *hugs* Thank you!!
Aww -- what a lovely combination of sweet and hot. I love Brian's progression from "barking" to "gruff" to completely relenting and protective. And the rest... as others have already said so well: "Guh!" :D
Thank you so much! I really had fun writing about this and just can't *resist* protective!Brian.
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I'm only just getting around to reading these, but I'm thinking it was worth the wait. ;) I have to agree with Brian and everyone else - Damn. :D
Justin looked up at him coyly before he pulled Brian's hips closer. His hands ran over Brian's ass, and he brought one to the front to rub Brian's dick through his jeans. He kissed it through the denim, mouthing and rutting at it. It was hotter than anything the trick at Babylon had done. Grabbing his head, Brian tried not to buck into Justin's mouth.
Guh. No words for how hot I found this part.
This had sweet and hot and protective!Brian - what more could I want? :D
Well, thanks for coming back to read and for such wonderful feedback. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this. It was fun to write. :D
Ooooh, greedy!Justin and PIFA, what an excellent combination.
Yummy, I loved this one ;)
*hugs* Thank you...I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I am giving you a "poke" to let you know I've left feedback down below. You were not the IJ user to post this here, so I am not sure if you'll be notified of the comment. :)
"I'm coming up. Stay there."
Brian's always a hero, whether in ways large or small.
"Ahhh, but I haven't come," Brian remarked. "Yet."
A horny hero, without a doubt, but a hero nonetheless.
Justin sucked him deeper and deeper until unable to hold back, Brian pushed harder, bumping the back of Justin's throat. Justin moaned around his dick, choking just a bit, and Brian's hands moved from his hair to the back of his neck. His hips began to jerk more erratically, and Justin held them tightly, feeling Brian's cock tense.
Now, that's what I call good descriptive writing. Very VERY good.
Brian and Justin are lucky lucky men.
*blushes* Sometimes I freak out a little when I go back and read the porny stuff I wrote...
But thank you! It's been fun to see comments on my old stuff. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Brian and Justin are lucky lucky men.
I certainly can't argue that point! :-D |