I *know* this is porn and I should probably comment on that, but the humor in your writing is just spot-on that it made this so much more than porn.
I figure fuck it. We all know that I can come while Deb's yelling at me.
I need details on that one. *nods seriously*
And of course the last line is perfectly Deb and perfectly...well, perfect! Thanks for sharing this.
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NotEverything (noteverything) wrote in bj_action on June 5th, 2008 at 03:59 am