There are two things I wish to say to you.
1. I think i need to change my undies, and i'm sorry if that is TMI, but you did write porn, and you wrote it really fucking well, so what did you expect.
2. There were two moments that made me literally laugh out loud, and were just perfect...but i'm not leaving quotey feedback here, i'm saving it for the reposts on people's own journals, because then i have a good excuse to reread.
not that i need an excuse for this one.
so. fucking. good.
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Ny (not_yet_defined) wrote in bj_action on June 5th, 2008 at 01:56 am