Oh Tweeeeedyyyyyy!!! This is brilliant!!! The two POV's were genius, the little touches were genius - the creaking step, Deb's line about getting a grip, LMAO!
And the porn was totally hot and tied up with teh love, my favourite combination! Great season 1 dynamics between B/J.
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bj_action on June 5th, 2008 at 01:50 pm
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