O.M.G. tweedy. This is quite possibly the best piece of your writing I've ever read. This is just spectacular. The porn is HOT. So much hair!porn... omg this part just about killed me:

We’re both sweaty now and I run one hand up his wet back, pulling at his hair. His head snaps up and he reaches back...

And then it has this whole perfect S1 dynamic going on too. Brian can't resist teh Justin and Justin knows he's the shit, but he's still insecure too. And of course I fully appreciate the symmetry and both viewpoints :) God, just such an amazing fic. And this totally counts as a fic. You say you just write drabbles and the occasional porn, but this is so a fic. It's got more than just porn. It is TEH LOVE. *huge smackles*

Other parts I loved:

he just stares back at me until Debbie walks by and says, “Get a grip, Sunshine. And I’m not talking about your dick!”

It's so perfectly in character I can hear it.

skipping the creaky fifth step on the stairs.


I love that little detail :)

If I wasn’t already as hard as a rock, I’d leave. Seriously.

*snort* Sure Brian.

I take a couple of steps away from the door, grabbing at the bottom of my t-shirt. He helps me pull it off and his hands come back down to rub my chest and down my stomach. He never takes his eyes off mine.

guhhhhhhhhhhh that melted my brain

I can't quote any one part because the ENTIRE Justin-blowing-Brian part is just fantastic. Fantastic!