04 June 2008 @ 08:28 pm
Theme # 9: Season One With a Twist - 3 of 6  
TITLE: Push/Pull

AUTHOR: [info]_alicesprings

A/N: 117 gapfiller. Many thanks to [info]xie_xie_xie for the beta!



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“Not as long as I have you to protect me.”

Justin rubs his cold nose against your neck. You wrap your arm a little tighter around his shoulders. He's fucking fearless, you think.

He's a fucking idiot, you think.

You can't protect him. You don't even want to. You didn't ask for a fucking twink to insinuate himself so tightly into every aspect of your life, your friends, your son, talking himself into your bed night after night. But he did and now you can't get rid of him.

Justin shivers a little against your side.

“Cold?”

He nods. “Let's go back inside.”

You know Mikey's in there, turning those goddamned puppy dog eyes on Deb. Well you're not ready to forgive the little fucker just yet. You shake your head and grab Justin's hand, dragging him around to the side of the house.

You push him against the wall and shove your tongue in his mouth.

He pulls away with a gasp. “Brian! The Senator's inside!”

You slide your hand down the front of his pants, cupping his dick. You can feel it turn from half hard to fully erect in seconds. You smirk, knowing he no longer gives a shit whose inside.

He grabs you then, pulling you in close against his body, kissing you back. You love how he presses himself against you, how he wraps his arms around you, wraps his legs around you when you fuck him. He's always so eager. It makes you hard.

You press him to the wall again and lower his pants, freeing his cock. It's hard and curved up against the pale skin of his belly. You can never resist touching that soft skin, and you run a fingertip across it, watching goosebumps break out on his flesh

“Brian! It's freezing,” he says, but you ignore him and sink to your knees, taking his cock inside your mouth in one smooth movement.

He gasps again, in pleasure this time, and you feel his hands rest on the top of your head. You wrap an arm around his ass, bringing his body even closer, and start sucking him off quickly. His fingers weave paths through your hair and his hips thrust in time with the in and out movement of your mouth.

You know he won't last long, he never does when he's in your mouth, so you do the things he likes. You pull your mouth back and circle the head of his dick with your tongue a few times, jerking his shaft, milking him of pre-come. You swallow him back down to his balls and squeeze his hip to let him know he can take control. He does, gripping your hair tightly and fucking your face. In seconds, he's coming down your throat, hot spurts of his distinctive tasting come.

You swallow it down and when he slumps, spent, you lick his dick a few times, cleaning him up and tucking him back in his pants.

You stand and then he's smiling at you and draping himself in your arms, his tongue swiping around inside your mouth to taste himself.

You pull back and he sighs, smiling goofily. You rub your nose against his and then let him go.

“Wait, where are you going? Aren't you coming back in?” he asks, looking confused.

You shake your head.

You leave him standing next to Debbie's house and head to the jeep.
 
 
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[info]ex_4cupcakes771 on June 5th, 2008 12:57 am (UTC)
That was just perfectly hot. I love how Brian is just starting to get addicted to Justin and Justin is still a little confused over Brian...
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 03:23 am (UTC)
Thank you, I love the push/pull dynamics they had in season 1. Glad you enjoyed it!
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on June 5th, 2008 01:14 am (UTC)
Oh god, this is so perfect. This will be one of those fics that becomes canon for me... Hot, but so much more.
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 03:28 am (UTC)
This will be one of those fics that becomes canon for me

That is the best compliment EVER! Thank you so much for the beautiful feedback!
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pendulumchanges: 117 - 'fighter' Justin vs. St. James[info]pendulumchanges on June 5th, 2008 01:16 am (UTC)
Adorable fic. I love indignant!Justin and how he turns very quickly into horny!Justin and then I absolutely ADORE happy, goofily smiling Justin draping himself on Brian. *happy sigh*
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:03 am (UTC)
Indignant to horny!Justin in 0.003 seconds!

Thanks so much! I'm happy you liked it!
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on June 5th, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
Such an interesting fic. I really liked all of the emotions wrapped up in the porn, the confusion about the relationship from both sides.

I liked the comparison in this line too:

He's fucking fearless, you think.

He's a fucking idiot, you think.
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:04 am (UTC)
Such an interesting fic. I really liked all of the emotions wrapped up in the porn, the confusion about the relationship from both sides.

I'm glad my intentions came through! Thank you very much! Glad you liked it!
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testdog65: B/J shotgun[info]testdog65 on June 5th, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
Wonderfully hot but so much more than just porn. What a terrific S1 ficlet. Great mood, great gap-filler. And this:

You swallow him back down to his balls and squeeze his hip to let him know he can take control. He does, gripping your hair tightly and fucking your face.

Guh. Now that's an image I'll be happy to have stuck in my head for a long time to come. Thank you so much for writing this!

~Ellen
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:05 am (UTC)
As always, thank you for the amazing feedback Ellen! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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Ny: B&J outside - i have you ia[info]not_yet_defined on June 5th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
not only was this hot. but the tone is excellent for a gapfiller set at 117. this was just a gorgeous brian pov at this point in time in the series.
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:06 am (UTC)
Thank you for the amazing feedback! I'm so pleased!
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secretsolitaire: bj kiss[info]secretsolitaire on June 5th, 2008 02:18 am (UTC)
This was so short, but the characterizations were absolutely perfect. I love Brian's reservations and Justin's eagerness. And this line spoke to the intimacy (and hotness!) that's already between them:

You swallow him back down to his balls and squeeze his hip to let him know he can take control. He does, gripping your hair tightly and fucking your face.
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
Eee! Thank you for the glorious feedback! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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passing_through: tangled_legs_of_love[info]passing_through on June 5th, 2008 02:31 am (UTC)
This is so good. It's completely IC and incredibly hot.

My favorite part

You love how he presses himself against you, how he wraps his arms around you, wraps his legs around you when you fuck him. He's always so eager. It makes you hard.

Perfect.




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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm very happy you enjoyed it!
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rosy5000: BJ French Kiss[info]rosy5000 on June 5th, 2008 03:11 am (UTC)
Oh, YES! This, coming after the shotgun kiss (one of my fave kisses).... makes me VERY happy! hehe Soooo very hot! Brian leaving at the end is typical for Brian. He's still trying to fight his feelings for Justin.
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:08 am (UTC)
He sure is. Thank you very much for the lovely feedback! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
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[info]merepersiflage on June 5th, 2008 03:34 am (UTC)
Oh so hot and then the end. I was hooked the second you said 1X17 gap filler and then you started with that line and Brian's pov and I'm incoherent like a mad fangirl.
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:08 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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[info]noteverything on June 5th, 2008 04:04 am (UTC)
Excellent...I love how Brian already knows Justin well enough to do the things he likes when he sucks him off. This is just a well-done little gapfiller. Sweet and hot altogether...thanks for sharing it!
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:09 am (UTC)
Thank you for the great feedback! I'm so happy you liked it!
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brianslave68: bj brian protects justin 117[info]brianslave68 on June 5th, 2008 04:17 am (UTC)
The end scene of 117 is one of my favorites from season 1 and you've totally taken it to another level now. This gapfiller is believable and in character. Thanks for enhancing an already awesome scene. Oh and it was hot too!
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:10 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you for the beautiful feedback! 117 is a great episode, for Brian especially. So glad you liked it!
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kata_ny: 104 gotcha[info]kata_ny on June 5th, 2008 08:11 am (UTC)
i love your Brian voice.always have,always will.
besides of that,this was totally hot!and the thought that Brian doing exactly what Justin likes!!he sooo cares about him!!!!!
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:10 am (UTC)
Lol! Thank you Kata! I'm so happy you liked it!
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[info]claddagh_girl on June 5th, 2008 09:33 am (UTC)
That left me feeling really sad for some reason. That probably wasn't your intention and I'm not sure why I had that response, but I did. It made me think 'Awww, Brian!'
That was really sweet, and hot, but that goes without saying.
Well done.
:o)
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:15 am (UTC)
Yeah, it did have a melancholy feel about it. I think Brian leaving the room while Deb and Michael made up in 117, coupled with Justin putting Brian in the role of his protector stirred up a few emotions in Brian. And we know he doesn't deal well with his emotions!

I'm most pleased you liked it. Thanks for the great feedback!
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singlewoman: I have you[info]singlewoman on June 5th, 2008 02:00 pm (UTC)
Very hot and a great 117 gapfiller. I love the fact it is from Brian's POV. These lines are great and oh so true:

He's fucking fearless, you think.

He's a fucking idiot, you think.

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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it!
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[info]besamislabios on June 5th, 2008 02:51 pm (UTC)
Perfect gapfiller. It was very hot:

You know he won't last long, he never does when he's in your mouth, so you do the things he likes. You pull your mouth back and circle the head of his dick with your tongue a few times, jerking his shaft, milking him of pre-come. You swallow him back down to his balls and squeeze his hip to let him know he can take control. He does, gripping your hair tightly and fucking your face. In seconds, he's coming down your throat, hot spurts of his distinctive tasting come.

I loved this and your Brian voice is perfect too me. :))
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you very much! I'm so pleased to hear that!
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outlander: Love BJ[info]outlander on June 5th, 2008 05:17 pm (UTC)
I love sweet S1 Justin trying to resist. Good luck with that!

You swallow him back down to his balls and squeeze his hip to let him know he can take control. He does, gripping your hair tightly and fucking your face.

Wow. Is it warm in here or is it just me? Any chance I can get a glass of water here? Maybe a little time to myself?

Perfect gapfiller.
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 7th, 2008 04:17 am (UTC)
Lol! Porn is not my strong suit, so I'm glad you found it hot! Thanks very much!
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sanami276: Queer as Folk / Framed peaking[info]ohfreckle on June 8th, 2008 08:49 pm (UTC)
I'm pretty much sure this was what happened, a perfect gapfiller. And hot porn, you absolutely win ♥
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on June 10th, 2008 12:25 pm (UTC)
Eeee! Thank you my dear, you've made me very happy!
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Fundles[info]fun_demented on May 15th, 2009 10:47 am (UTC)
OH MY GOD! This is so good. Listen, I can't stand that you said you usually hate your stuff, because this extremely smart. Steadily paced and insightful. And you tell us all about them, without telling us anything! You show show show show show. In fact, what you TELL us is the opposite of what you show us. Which always us to actually THINK while we're reading porn, which most of us in this fandom love to do, but it's rare to find a fic that allows us to (simply because it's a real challenge for a writer and requires expertise, along with innate talent and instinct, which you have all of).

Obviously, I adore the premise. It's very similar to the one in my story that you read the other day: Justin is eager, Brian is in denial, his actions betray him, at Deb's, etc.

So that's the first thing that's great and likeable for me personally. But you really wrote them well. Very IC for both of them.

And this: You know he won't last long, he never does when he's in your mouth, so you do the things he likes. You pull your mouth back and circle the head of his dick with your tongue a few times, jerking his shaft, milking him of pre-come. You swallow him back down to his balls and squeeze his hip to let him know he can take control. He does, gripping your hair tightly and fucking your face. In seconds, he's coming down your throat, hot spurts of his distinctive tasting come.

You swallow it down and when he slumps, spent, you lick his dick a few times, cleaning him up and tucking him back in his pants.


Is I SWEAR TO GOD the hottest, sexiest, lovingest blowjob I've ever read. IT'S PERFECT. I could reread that and imagine it forever. In fact, I am absolutely going to rewatch that scene and think about this while I watch. Every once in a while, I read a fic and decide it's canon. This here is canon for me now. *Nods and places it in memories along with the other _alicesprings story in there*
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Britin: 117 shotgun by nxya[info]_alicesprings on May 15th, 2009 07:18 pm (UTC)
*dead*

I want to live inside this feedback forever. THANK YOU!! You have made me very happy!!!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I tried really, really hard to show and not tell with this fic, and I think I achieved it, which is probably why I do actually like this fic. Unlike most of my others!

And I'm not much of a porn writer, so I'm very pleased you found the blowjob hot. And dude, this is your new canon?? Seriously, you have made me very happy!!!
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Fundles[info]fun_demented on November 26th, 2010 08:33 am (UTC)
Just reread it due to a rec and love it just as much now as then. *Stays inside it*
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Britin[info]_alicesprings on November 26th, 2010 09:01 am (UTC)
THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! :D :D
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rainbow1907: Brian & Justin You're Welcome[info]rainbow1907 on December 1st, 2010 10:13 am (UTC)
Oh, I like this!!! Awesome fic, hot too but so much more. The title is perfect. You show their dynamics in season one, how they were both confused and unsure where they stood with each other. Now that I've read it I wonder if it maybe happened like that on the show and I have a faulty memory of what was in canon ;) I think this is how it should have been. Thanks so much! Rena :)
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Britin[info]_alicesprings on December 1st, 2010 10:43 pm (UTC)
Well gosh, you just made my day! Thanks so much for the lovely feedback! :)
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