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Ny ([info]not_yet_defined) wrote in [info]bj_action,
@ 2008-03-15 12:10:00

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Entry tags:author: not_yet_defined, ides challenge

Ides of March Challenge: 2 of 3
Title: Early Mornings
AuthorArtist: [info]not_yet_defined
Fandom/Pairing/Prompt: Queer as Folk/Brian and Justin/Elements
Rating: NC-17
Summary: PWP...that takes place in the morning, how much more summary do you need? :P
Disclaimer: I'm just borrowing brian and justin, sadly.
Highlight for Warnings: * schmoopy butt secks *
Beta: sadly self beta'd...not as fun as it sounds.





I woke up nearly suffocating from heat and gingerly kicked my left leg free of the blankets while trying not to disturb the sleeping mass half sprawled on top of me. His skin was so fucking warm there was a slight sheen of sweat between us in the places where our skin came in contact. The kid was a fucking furnace when he slept, buried under a mound of blankets.

It was early. The sun wasn't even up yet, although the sky had begun to lighten. I didn't need to be up for at least another hour, so once I had freed an arm and a leg, and I could breathe again I let myself relax under his weight. I took a deep breath, inhaling a tuft of blond. I reached up and ran my fingers through his hair, pulling it off of his face and mine, letting them rest in damp hair at the base of his neck. Using my foot I tugged the blankets a bit lower. He just shifted closer, turning his face into my skin, his dick, soft and warm, pressing against my thigh.

I almost had the thought that this was a nearly perfect way to start my day, but decided I couldn't deal with that much lesbianism this early in the morning.

I trailed my fingers down his back, pushing the duvet further down as I went. He mumbled and the hand curled on my chest shot down and flailed around searching for the edge of the blanket.

Finally his head shot up and he tried to glare at me, "Brian, what the fuck?"

Glaring was fairly unproductive when you had a massive case of bed head, were rubbing sleep out of your eyes, and I could feel your cock twitching on my thigh. I didn't tell him that though.

Instead I smiled serenely, "Good morning, Sunshine."

"Freezing me to death is not an effective way to go about getting me to wake up and let you fuck me."

I laughed; he had already rolled onto his back, and was simultaneously guiding me down on top of him and a blanket back over us.

"Then why are pulling me down on top of you?"

"I'm cold."

"Then why is your dick getting so hard?"

"Shut up and fuck me."

I huffed a laugh against his skin as my lips grazed his neck. He was wrong; waking him up this way worked every goddamn time.

I reached down and stroked his cock, coaxing it awake more deftly than I had Justin while my tongue stroked over his nipple. His left hand rested on the back of my head, his right resting on the sheets. I bit down and tugged gently as my thumb glided over his wet slit and felt his hand tighten in my hair as he clenched the sheets. His chest moved up and down rapidly under me.

"Brian."

I glanced up at him; he was all flushed cheeks, fiery eyes, and moist lips. Foreplay was all well and good, but sometimes it was just really fucking unnecessary. I crushed my lips against his, losing myself for a moment in the depths of his mouth, drinking him in like water. I wildly thought there was nothing better then kissing Justin, until I felt the weight of his legs wrapping around my waist and he pressed the condom against my hand and brought me back to earth. I pulled back enough to roll it on and groaned as I watched him suck two of his fingers into his mouth, coating them in spit, before working them into his ass. I drizzled some lube on my own, and gently pushed one in alongside his. The sight of us both inside of him mesmerized me, until he pulled his out, and grabbed my wrist. "Brian," he breathed and I thought sometimes we both needed this more than we needed air.

I pressed inside of him. So fucking hot and wet and perfect and Christ I was going to be finished before this even started. He was panting beneath me. I rested my forehead against his shoulder, steadying myself, attempting to find some control. He groaned in protest, "Brian, fuck don't stop." My hand found his, clutching at the sheets and I pulled it up, threading my fingers through his as I pressed it back into bed beside his head, grounding us both. His breathing slowed a fraction and I thought it was safe to move and pulled almost all way out, before pushing back in. The head my cock passed over his prostate and his perfect, tight little ass clenched around me, and my lips were back on his and the briefly gained control disintegrated instantaneously. He was gripping my arm hard enough to bruise, and arching up to kiss me anywhere he could reach, as I thrust in hard and fast.

Our kisses were wet and sloppy, and I was dimly aware that the manner in which I was fucking him would probably be best described as frantic. But god this feels so fucking good. I thought as I tensed and came inside of him. The hot flood of come set him off, and I felt him follow just behind me.

I collapsed on top of him. Until I felt him pushing against me and mumbling that I was suffocating him. I thought that was only fair, considering it was how I started my day. I rolled off of him though, onto my back.

We were laying side by side, my hand resting on his thigh, the only place we touched. I didn't need to look to know he was already falling back asleep.

I glanced at the clock; I had to be up in 5 minutes. I reached over, turned off the alarm, then lay back down, this time using Justin as a human body pillow and went back to sleep.



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[info]snowmore
2008-03-15 06:00 pm UTC (link)
A perfect morning, NY! How Brian woke and what followed, and the descriptions of bed head hair and soft and warm dicks, really created the scene to come!

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[info]not_yet_defined
2008-03-15 06:56 pm UTC (link)
you are always so sweet to me Snow. *licks* thank you dear.

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[info]happier_bunny
2008-03-15 06:57 pm UTC (link)
Oh man, this made me all tingly. I love how you used the elements theme.

A wonderful porny delight!

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-15 11:51 pm UTC

[info]kata_ny
2008-03-15 07:09 pm UTC (link)
that was what I needed.sleepy yet ready to fuck Justin and slightly lesbianic Brian!I was so waiting for this...I was totally lost between the harry potter and godknowswhat fics looking for teh love and now I have found it.*SIGHS*
"I thought sometimes we both needed this more than we needed air." I absolutely L O V E that sentence!!!

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-15 11:54 pm UTC

[info]xie_xie_xie
2008-03-15 07:20 pm UTC (link)
Seriously, totally gorgeously beautiful and hot.

But Justin does NOT EVER HAVE BED HEAD KTHNX.

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-15 11:56 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie, 2008-03-16 12:05 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 02:18 am UTC

[info]secretsolitaire
2008-03-15 08:02 pm UTC (link)
Mmmmmmm, yummy morning sex. Enjoyed this!

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-15 11:57 pm UTC

[info]leelee2005
2008-03-15 08:25 pm UTC (link)
I bet Brian wishes every morning would start like this for them. ;)

I reached over, turned off the alarm, then lay back down, this time using Justin as a human body pillow and went back to sleep.

I love that image.

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 12:02 am UTC

[info]my2cats
2008-03-15 09:51 pm UTC (link)
Of course Brian is going back to sleep after that strenuous workout,lol

What a way to wake up...


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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 12:04 am UTC

[info]testdog65
2008-03-15 10:45 pm UTC (link)
What a perfect combination of humor and heat. It was all so warm and enveloping. You really drew me in with the description of Justin wrapped around Brian. And the way that Justin woke up all irritated was priceless. But that sure didn't last long, and I loved the quick and immediate intensity of their need for each other. *fans self*

I really liked this:

I glanced up at him; he was all flushed cheeks, fiery eyes, and moist lips. Foreplay was all well and good, but sometimes it was just really fucking unnecessary.

And this:

I collapsed on top of him. Until I felt him pushing against me and mumbling that I was suffocating him. I thought that was only fair, considering it was how I started my day.

And of course Brian shuts off the alarm and goes back to sleep. A deliciously well done story!

~Ellen

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 12:05 am UTC

[info]noteverything
2008-03-15 11:30 pm UTC (link)
Dang, girl! You like, *REALLY* used that prompt! I am so impressed...that's just so cool.

And, it's totally hot, delicious, frantic porn.

*loves it and you*

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 12:07 am UTC

[info]vamphile
2008-03-15 11:53 pm UTC (link)
glanced up at him; he was all flushed cheeks, fiery eyes, and moist lips. Foreplay was all well and good, but sometimes it was just really fucking unnecessary. I crushed my lips against his, losing myself for a moment in the depths of his mouth, drinking him in like water. I wildly thought there was nothing better then kissing Justin, until I felt the weight of his legs wrapping around my waist and he pressed the condom against my hand and brought me back to earth. I pulled back enough to roll it on and groaned as I watched him suck two of his fingers into his mouth, coating them in spit, before working them into his ass. I drizzled some lube on my own, and gently pushed one in alongside his. The sight of us both inside of him mesmerized me, until he pulled his out, and grabbed my wrist. "Brian," he breathed and I thought sometimes we both needed this more than we needed air.


i just want to stare at that for a while.

and hate you a little.
and love you a lot.
and ask you why you don't write more often, but i i know that's an annoying question.

this was... beautiful.

now change faction to fraction and it's all good

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 12:00 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]vamphile, 2008-03-16 12:04 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 02:23 am UTC

[info]plasticine_star
2008-03-16 01:27 am UTC (link)
Ny,

You truly outdid yourself, this was fucking hot. Very creative use of the prompt.

"Freezing me to death is not an effective way to go about getting me to wake up and let you fuck me." that is just so Justin : )

using teh Justin as a body pillow= love

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 02:20 am UTC

[info]herefordroad
2008-03-16 04:16 am UTC (link)
brian has justin down to a science, i loved the early morning dialogue:

"Freezing me to death is not an effective way to go about getting me to wake up and let you fuck me."

"Then why are pulling me down on top of you?"

"I'm cold."

"Then why is your dick getting so hard?"

"Shut up and fuck me."

..."He was wrong; waking him up this way worked every goddamn time."

but this is my favorite:

"Foreplay was all well and good, but sometimes it was just really fucking unnecessary."

great fic.

jeannie


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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 05:53 am UTC

[info]pretty_words224
2008-03-16 04:48 am UTC (link)
So so so good! omg, I wanna start my mornings off like this!! *dies again*

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 05:56 am UTC

[info]libra2
2008-03-16 05:12 am UTC (link)
Yay, porn! Okay, a little sweetness too :)

He was wrong; waking him up this way worked every goddamn time.

"Brian," he breathed and I thought sometimes we both needed this more than we needed air.

I collapsed on top of him. Until I felt him pushing against me and mumbling that I was suffocating him. I thought that was only fair, considering it was how I started my day.


Those were my favorite lines :)
Hot and sweet.
The end.

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 05:58 am UTC

[info]sexy_pumpkin
2008-03-16 05:59 am UTC (link)
Gorgeous fic, so warm & hot & sexy, how come I've never liked sex 1st thing in the morning *grins* Oh I know, BK's not there, really enjoyed this, of course, it's porn, lovely.

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 06:43 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]sexy_pumpkin, 2008-03-16 07:35 am UTC

[info]aramina
2008-03-16 06:09 am UTC (link)
He mumbled and the hand curled on my chest shot down and flailed around searching for the edge of the blanket.

Finally his head shot up and he tried to glare at me, "Brian, what the fuck?"


That made me giggle. And pretty much everything after it made me swoon. *wanders off, grinning like a loon*

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 06:45 am UTC

[info]notreallyme10
2008-03-16 05:35 pm UTC (link)
I love them waking up just to fuck and then going back to sleep. Lovely imagery and very hot!

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 09:38 pm UTC

[info]irish_cream
2008-03-16 05:36 pm UTC (link)
mmmh, lovely! I can just imagine them all warm and sleepy. *drools*

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-16 09:39 pm UTC

[info]pendulumchanges
2008-03-17 02:31 am UTC (link)
I love the warning *LOL* I want all fics to carry this warning and contain this much wonderful schmoopy butt secks.

I think my favorite part might be this:
I trailed my fingers down his back, pushing the duvet further down as I went. He mumbled and the hand curled on my chest shot down and flailed around searching for the edge of the blanket.

Finally his head shot up and he tried to glare at me, "Brian, what the fuck?"


It's just so fucking adorable. The entire exchange just after that is priceless - Shut up and fuck me. :D :D :D

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-17 03:23 am UTC

[info]rosy5000
2008-03-17 04:18 am UTC (link)
If I could be woken up like that, I may not complain so much. Justin is so lucky. ;)

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-19 05:11 am UTC

[info]besamislabios
2008-03-17 02:23 pm UTC (link)
Ny, early morning sex, hot and sexy. And before I forget, I loved the wet and sloppy kisses, guh.

Thank you for writing. &hearts

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-03-19 05:13 am UTC

[info]britin_forever
2008-03-27 05:55 am UTC (link)
What can I say that everyone else hasn't? Other than that I love this fic for the porn but also for the general sweetness (Don't tell Brian I said that *grin*) and love you show between B/J. Great Job!
~Victoria~

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-04-05 09:24 pm UTC

[info]bodleian
2009-06-24 07:09 pm UTC (link)
What a great way to wake up. Thanks for letting us watch!

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2009-06-25 06:43 pm UTC

[info]ahaw9913
2009-06-25 12:33 am UTC (link)
Wow! You write the sexiest Sleepy!Justin EVER!!! Just so great! So hot, yet so beautiful!

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2009-06-25 06:43 pm UTC


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