besamislabios ([info]besamislabios) wrote in [info]bj_action on January 16th, 2008 at 07:46 pm
This was amazing so very hot. I liked how you wrote the alternate povs.

I loved this:

I love to get him wet, too wet. All over so that my hands and fingers and dick slip and slide over smooth skin and rough pubes. I like him messy, covered in come and sweat and lube.

and the last line:

His orgasms are beautiful and almost scary in their intensity. Sort of like him.

So very beautiful and wow and guh at the same time!
Thank you.
 
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