This was amazing so very hot. I liked how you wrote the alternate povs.
I loved this:
I love to get him wet, too wet. All over so that my hands and fingers and dick slip and slide over smooth skin and rough pubes. I like him messy, covered in come and sweat and lube.
and the last line:
His orgasms are beautiful and almost scary in their intensity. Sort of like him.
So very beautiful and wow and guh at the same time!
Thank you.
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besamislabios (besamislabios) wrote in bj_action on January 16th, 2008 at 07:46 pm