Love. I just. Oh my God. No really. OH MY GOD. I'm sitting here right now absolutely floored and stunned and amazed by these fragments.
Do you know how brilliant this is? Seriously? How fucking, incredibly, beautifully brilliant? I've no words. I'm just staring here at the screen trying to compose my thoughts because you've blown me away with the sheer gorgeousness of this.
I never would have thought to rewrite that scene from Draco's POV. But it's amazing. And incredible. And the emotions you pour into it...the sense of horror and fear and just numbness that seeps through in your description and in Draco's thoughts...love.
This is genius.
I love it so much. I want more. Seriously. More. Please?