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my_sam_dean ([info]my_sam_dean) wrote in [info]30_somethings,
@ 2008-06-05 10:01:00

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Not So Bad

Fandom:  Supernatural
Title:  Not So Bad
Author:  my_sam_dean
Theme(s): Night - Prompt #1 - Blind
Pairing/Characters: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Disclaimer/claimer:  I own nothing Supernatural.
Critiques: (yes/no)  Yes
Summary: Sam and Dean check into a motel with no electricity.

Sam flicked the light switch. "Power's out."

"Guess we should be glad it isn't freezing outside." Sam could barely see Dean in the dim light as he set down his duffel.

"Suppose," Sam agreed even though he didn't feel too grateful. After all their hours spent driving, he just wanted a decent motel room. He never thought he'd consider electricity a luxury.

"It won't be that bad. We just get the grime off and go to sleep anyway."

Sam heard Dean's startled yell as the water started to run. "Shit!"

"Cold water, Dean?" Sam tried to keep the smile out of his voice.

"At least I'm mostly clean," Dean replied when he came out of the bathroom. "That's more than I can say about you."

Sam thought about how filthy he was and cold water didn't seem to unappealling anymore.

Dean just shook his head when the icy water hit Sam and he'd yelled.

Clutching a towel, teeth chattering, Sam made his way back to his duffle to search for clean clothes in the dark.

"Come here, Sam," Dean spoke to him from the direction of the beds.

"I can't find clean boxers," the frustration came through loud and clear.

Dean sighed. "You dried off?"

"Yeah."

"Just get over here. You'll get warm, fall asleep, and won't even miss your clothes. You can look for them in the morning when its light out. "

Sam kept searching, stubborn as he was.

"Sam."

Sam felt his way over to the bed where Dean held back the covers to welcome him in.

"It's not so bad, Sammy," Dean curled up behind him an arm around his abdomen. "Just get some rest."

Sam was lulled to sleep by the sound of Dean's breathing and the warmth of his skin.

It wasn't so bad.




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[info]javagabbers
2008-06-05 06:40 pm UTC (link)
Aww, this was just..cute! Well it was more than cute, it's funny and loving and I don't know.. lol. *apparently I'm not eloquent with my words today* ^=^

A wet, cold and soon to be warm Sam. Dean's strong arm wrapped around his brother's waist. This line was my favorite:

Sam was lulled to sleep by the sound of Dean's breathing and the warmth of his skin.

All around just a nice little piece! :)

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[info]my_sam_dean
2008-06-05 07:30 pm UTC (link)
I'm happy that you enjoyed the story. Always nice to know what lines come through the most. Thanks for the great comments! :)

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