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Gabs or Gabby (javagabbers) wrote in 30_somethings,
@ 2008-05-28 12:17:00

VigBean Entry
Title: A Raw Act of Possession & Love
Fandom: RPS VigBean
Pairing: Sean Bean & Viggo Mortensen
Table/Prompt: Angsts/#22 Silence
W/C: 159
Rated: PG
Warning: Violence implied not described, pet/slave
Squicks: See Above
Disclaimer: I don't know the true sexual orientation of these two men. Written for the amusement of a sick n twisted mind.
A/N: Does not follow conventional constructs of a story.

A Raw Act of Possession and Love

On the floor you will stay
my pet
remaining my slave
Your feeling
of that innate desire to flee
is overwhelming you

Knowing you cannot subdue me
nor escape
you begin to beg for this to end
Yet I am not through with you
not sure if I ever will be

Look at you
your such a mess
So injured you look
Your skin has swirling shades of deep blue and ghostly black
You have been made to suffer many abuses
all of which are prominent upon your flesh

You will not flee and
stay with me you surely shall
for fear of enduring more
My conscience bothers me not
for I have none

Your whelps of pain and silent screams are deafening
they could be heard from an endless distance
if there were only someone around to hear
Despite everything
I must admit in my own twisted way
I love you..

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	the_march_hare 2008-05-30 12:37 am UTC (link)
	Very nice. Very scary. I think that is what I liked about it. Such a basic discription and yet very horrifying. YOu do really good with that kind of image. (Reply to this) (Thread)

javagabbers
2008-05-30 07:06 am UTC (link)

Such a basic discription and yet very horrifying.

Thank you very much. I think to be able to illicit strong emotions from people from just a few words is a very good thing. (isn't it?) I mean how often can just a few words or a single paragraph make someone feel something so strong?

I'm so glad you took the time to read this and that your comment is a great compliment! :)

And honestly, tell me, do you really think I do good with these short little drabbles? Cuz I've been wondering lately if they are just lame and that maybe people much more enjoy fics with full plots and dialouge.

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	the_march_hare 2008-05-30 07:13 am UTC (link)
	It is different. But I like it. Most people do prefer fic, gives them more to work with. But I like the starkness. Maybe with your next prompt try both and see which one you like better???? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

javagabbers
2008-06-01 11:45 pm UTC (link)

You're right. It is different. But for some reason it seems like sometimes that it is all I can put out. Somebody once told me that it seems like my short pieces are a great layout/basis for a full story.. like it could be the main theme but I just don't elaborate any further. I don't know what it is about those short pieces.. but I just adore them. To me it soo much hits on all the main points without all the "crap" in between ya know?

I'm glad that you enjoy the starkness of it. lol.. Hell, I'm just glad you read my stuff at all! :) And again, I'm sure you're right. Most peeps do enjoy full fics, whether they are epic or just ficlets. I know my writing style is unusual and it isn't for everyone.. but it isn't horrible is it?

And for my next prompt I am going to post a full ficlet instead of my regular stuff. Not that it matters lol.. nobody besides you is reading them anyway. I'm not sure if it's cuz nobody is into "VigBean" or if people are more just on a "I want a recognition trip" then they're interested in actually reading stories.

Peace.

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