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Deanna ([info]gothic_comedian) wrote in [info]100quills,
@ 2008-05-04 12:48:00

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Current mood: content
Current music:Hell is Living Without You - Alice Cooper
Entry tags:sirius 50.4 (gothic_comedian)

gothic_comedian: Smoking Does Not Ruin Just Kissing (Sirius, NC-17)
Title: Smoking Does Not Ruin Just Kissing
Author: gothic_comedian
Rating: NC-17
Prompt Set: 50.4
Prompt: #19 Quitting
Word Count: 930
Summary: Sirius moves in with Remus, but Remus has only one condition: Sirius must stop smoking.
Warnings: m/m, oral sex, cum swap (The act of taking semen into ones mouth and "swapping" in into another's through kissing)
Notes: I didn’t mean for this to turn into smut but when you brainstorm while listening to a lecture on why kids shouldn’t smoke you get some strange ideas. My Prompt Table




“Oh come on Remus, I’ll chew gum afterwards or something if it bothers you that much” Sirius whined at his newly acquired live in lover who he had recently discovered hated the smell of cigarette smoke. Sirius had always hid his love of cigarettes from Remus but when he finally broke the news to his companion, he never realized it’d be such a big deal. Remus sighed and rubbed the bridge of his nose in aggravation, they’d been arguing about this all morning and to be perfectly honest, he was ready to put a cigarette out in Sirius’s eye. “I appreciate your want to live with me in my home Sirius, but it is my home, and it a small messy shack as it is, I do not need it smelling like an ashtray on top of the fact” he said with a very final tone to his voice as he plucked the cigarette from his lovers lips and put it out in the nearby sink.

Sirius pouted in that way that usually got him whatever he wanted from his dearest Moony but when his dearest turned away to put away dishes he knew he was going to have to pull out the big guns. But before he could do anything Remus spoke again, “Besides, since you’ve started smoking you taste terrible” he said simply as he continued to put away the cookware. The black haired man raised an eyebrow, “What tastes terrible?” he asked rather unsure. “Everything tastes terrible” Remus once again replied as if he was stating that the sky was indeed blue.

Sirius’s mouth just hung open in shock; he could not believe that Remus dared suggest such a thing! It had to be a lie, some sort of ploy to get him to quit, “It does not!” he said sounding extremely offended. Remus turned back to Sirius with a smirk playing on his lips, “You just haven’t tasted yourself lately”. “Yeah well…” Sirius said hesitantly, for a change he couldn’t come up with a snappy response, “it’s not like I can”. Deciding he had won this round Sirius looked very smug as he crossed his arms.

A rather scary look spread onto Remus’s face as he suddenly swooped down and slammed his lips roughly into Sirius’s. Sirius was completely taken by surprise and hardly had a chance to respond before Remus had pulled away and was kneeling between his legs. Sirius’s breath hitched in his throat as Remus began to rub his already hardening cock through the confines of his leather pants. The sound of said leather pants being unzipped seemed to echo throughout the room, as did the loud moan Sirius let out when his warm member came into contact with the cool air.

Remus loud out a low growling noise as he appraised the cock in front of him momentarily. Sirius looked down at the mousy haired man and watched him watch his cock, “Fuck Moony, either suck it or leave me alone to have a good wank” he said reaching out and running a hand over his lover’s hair and placed his hand at the back of Remus’s neck, nudging him forward slightly. Remus didn’t need further encouragement, and wrapped his mouth around Sirius’s prick.

Another moan escaped Sirius’s lips as he tried to arch his hips up but found Remus’s oddly strong hands holding him in place and keeping him from getting what he wanted. He let out a whimper as Remus drew back and ran his tongue over the head and down the shaft. But Sirius was in no mood for teasing and grabbed a fistful of his lover’s hair and forced his head back up and shoved his prick, slick with precum and saliva, into Remus’s face, “Forget the damned foreplay Moony!”

This earned him a roll of the eyes from Remus but he accommodated his lover all the same by taking his pick back into his mouth. Sirius let out a tortured sounding moan, “Fuck Moony….” He murmured loosing himself in the delicious sucking feeling and tightened his grip on the short brown hair. Remus let out a throaty moan at Sirius’s words before he sped up his menstruations, bobbing his head up in down in time with Sirius’s rapid breathing.

Sirius quickly found he couldn’t hold on any longer and cried out as he came violently into Remus’s waiting mouth. He let out a content sigh as he relinquished his grip on Remus’s hair, but as soon as he let go he felt Remus get up and straddle his hips. Remus slammed their lips together once again; Sirius moaned this time as he felt Remus’s own arousal pressing into his stomach. But this moan only gave Remus the opening he needed, and proceeded to spit Sirius’s own cum into his mouth.

A panicked look came onto Sirius’s face as Remus held his jaw firmly shut, “Swallow” the usually innocent looking man said sternly. The liquid in his mouth disgusted Sirius, he wouldn’t drink Remus’s cum with dinner but it had never tasted like this, Merlin, it was disgusting. Had he really been putting his Moony through this? He tried to struggle but Remus did not budge, so, he did as he was told and swallowed. Feeling the oddly textured wad roll down his throat was one of the most disgusting experiences of his life.

Remus let him go and arched an eyebrow, looking slightly amused, “Well?” he asked curiously. Sirius didn’t reply but simply took his cigarettes from his pocket and tossed them into the nearby garbage can.


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[info]ellee
2008-05-04 05:10 pm UTC (link)
First of all, your note was too funny. :P Secondly, I love how rushed this felt and Sirius's reaction at the end. Tehehe.
(Psst.. not to be mean or anything, but separating paragraphs when a new person speaks is always nice and better organized. A friend who will do a quick once-over to make sure grammar and punctuation is all good is nice too. :D)

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[info]gothic_comedian
2008-05-04 05:18 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much and I know what you mean, I've never gotten the proper hold on what is exactly right as far as what is and isn't correct formatting.

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